CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from jack silver
if you had entered the contest i have a feeling that you would have won it really was something and displays what the contest is about really well. enjoyed. look forward to reading more.
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if you had entered the contest i have a feeling that you would have won it really was something and displays what the contest is about really well. enjoyed. look forward to reading more.
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jack
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from joan marie
I liked the picture and the analogy between the snow and the coldness that can invade someone's soul. Great writing, joan marie
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I liked the picture and the analogy between the snow and the coldness that can invade someone's soul. Great writing, joan marie
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
What a shame you missed the deadline! This is a winner if ever I read one. Once again, I can't find anything to pick at or moan about. I love reading your work, you write to such a high standard.
All the best.
Kat
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What a shame you missed the deadline! This is a winner if ever I read one. Once again, I can't find anything to pick at or moan about. I love reading your work, you write to such a high standard.
All the best.
Kat
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from Dklrdmcches
By far, a fantastic read. this was tremendous as your words flowed like a river through my soul. great well woven words makes for an easy read which told a story of the fury of winter. thanks for sharing...DKLRD
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By far, a fantastic read. this was tremendous as your words flowed like a river through my soul. great well woven words makes for an easy read which told a story of the fury of winter. thanks for sharing...DKLRD
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from LynnRadford
Too bad you missed the deadline, this one certainly would've been a contender!
I especially liked the closing stanza. Something about it just spoke to something deep inside, I can't put my finger on it, but there you have it.
Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Lynn Radford
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Too bad you missed the deadline, this one certainly would've been a contender!
I especially liked the closing stanza. Something about it just spoke to something deep inside, I can't put my finger on it, but there you have it.
Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Lynn Radford
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
I love your personification of winter. Your words are lovely and bring out your feelings about he climate. I can't imagine living in the cold. But you portray it beautifully. I'd love to see snow again. This is an excellent job.
Delora
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I love your personification of winter. Your words are lovely and bring out your feelings about he climate. I can't imagine living in the cold. But you portray it beautifully. I'd love to see snow again. This is an excellent job.
Delora
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
Comment from QuietMtnSunrise
Creative. Glad you decided to post it. Although, I do like the snow...not necessarily the winter per se. I'm actually hoping spring will come, but snow is in the forecast for Sunday. I liked the line, "You hang around with darkened clouds, then next you sparkle white..." Oh how fresh powder is enticing all sparkly white! Great job here.
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Creative. Glad you decided to post it. Although, I do like the snow...not necessarily the winter per se. I'm actually hoping spring will come, but snow is in the forecast for Sunday. I liked the line, "You hang around with darkened clouds, then next you sparkle white..." Oh how fresh powder is enticing all sparkly white! Great job here.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
great presentation; well written; truthful and thought provoking; not a thing to correct; sorry about the deadline, but it does happen :-) There's always the next one :-) I'm ready for Spring :-)
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great presentation; well written; truthful and thought provoking; not a thing to correct; sorry about the deadline, but it does happen :-) There's always the next one :-) I'm ready for Spring :-)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
Comment from Judian James
I know you reviewed "Winter Doldrums?" Did you learn nothing from my advice???? This was well rhymed and metered but I completely disagree!! excellent
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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I know you reviewed "Winter Doldrums?" Did you learn nothing from my advice???? This was well rhymed and metered but I completely disagree!! excellent
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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The only advice that will make sense to me is to head south for the winter!! I bet you have a lot more sunny days up in Maine. With the Great Lakes, we get a lot of cloudy days, which is the worst part of winter. Spring is springing!
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Gorgeous sunny days, like today, constantly. We're in the mountains and over the ocean. It doesn't get any more beautiful than this!!
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In the mountains and over the ocean!! No wonder you write such lovely things about winter. Plus, nothing but sunny days! I'm the exact opposite. Landlocked, in the flatlands with mostly cloudy days. Yikes!
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Get out and get out now!
Comment from jojosug
I liked this poem and its double meaning. It read well and flowed beautifully. A real pleasure to read. The photo was also a good choice.
Jo
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I liked this poem and its double meaning. It read well and flowed beautifully. A real pleasure to read. The photo was also a good choice.
Jo
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
