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Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Interrogation"Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.
5 total reviews
Comment from WRITER1
Good chapter, I thought the interaction of the characters was really good. You might want to check out the spelling a little (Piss of,)just thought I'd let you know.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Good chapter, I thought the interaction of the characters was really good. You might want to check out the spelling a little (Piss of,)just thought I'd let you know.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Oops, thanks for that. Glad you liked it
Comment from Adri7enne
Not liking the interrogator at all, Figure Ted is in a hard spot. I'm having a good time following along on your journey. Interested enough, now, that the review and the comments are a nuissance. I want to just read the book. Good sign, eh? Keep them coming.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Not liking the interrogator at all, Figure Ted is in a hard spot. I'm having a good time following along on your journey. Interested enough, now, that the review and the comments are a nuissance. I want to just read the book. Good sign, eh? Keep them coming.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Thanks, I'm flattered.
Comment from utopian_dream_x
A great chapter, lots of tension throughout. I enjoyed reading both your dialogue and descriptions. This chapter flows at a good pace and you keep an equal balance between them both, which is great.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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A great chapter, lots of tension throughout. I enjoyed reading both your dialogue and descriptions. This chapter flows at a good pace and you keep an equal balance between them both, which is great.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I thought the conversation was a little one-sided, but that's what you get when you gag one of your characters.
Comment from carl8447
This is a bad review. But I'm going to say this thirller keeps on getting thriller. You got me on the edge of my seat and I love every second of it.
Carl
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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This is a bad review. But I'm going to say this thirller keeps on getting thriller. You got me on the edge of my seat and I love every second of it.
Carl
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Haha, you had me worried with your first comment. Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Comment from tkmartin
Your work is always so tightly written and well paced. Excellent imagery and characterisation as always. There is so much one could learn from your work.
cheers
TK
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Your work is always so tightly written and well paced. Excellent imagery and characterisation as always. There is so much one could learn from your work.
cheers
TK
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Oh, now I'm blushing. thank you so much.
