Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Beautiful artwork with poetry that gives a sense of rebirth and spring, love the last line beauty incubates, a haiku that gives a good feeling.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009

thanks for reading this past the time it's promoted and for your kind review.
Brooke :-)

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

Aw, this is lovely.

At the University that my children attend, there is a body of water on the campus that is called "Swan Lake." I could sit and watch the beautiful swans that reside there, all day.

This poem made me think of that beautiful scene. The photo you chose is adorable and fits nicely.

I enjoyed this.

Blessings,
~Nic

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009

Nic, anyplace named swan lake is sure OK by me - I'm ready to join you! :-) Thanks, Brooke

Comment from nukrz

Excellent

I havent written a haiku since I was in grade seven and that was a long time ago lol. Yours always seem to have a level of importance to them. Some are lovely with the environment and the weather and flowers but yours have meaning

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009

This is only my second haiku ever - balmy breezes from the day before was the first. They have so many rules that the thought of them makes me nervous! LOL Thank you, Brooke

Comment from Mischief's Momma

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

Just trying to catch up a little here :)

This is lovely, and what a great picture. All the best in the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009

Sharon, I so appreciate all your warm and thoughtful reviews, Brooke :-)

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

I like your take on the ugly duckling, and you managed to illustrate that concept with minimal words. Love begets beauty (inside and outide).

Thank you for sharing your wisdom.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009

I'm so glad you like this - thank you for taking the time to tell me :-) Brooke

reply by Poetic Friend on 01-Mar-2009

Brooke,

I like everything you have posted on Fanstory.

I only visit Fanstory on the weekends, but I always seek your poetry when I visit. :)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Two perfect haiku in a row! I'm not surprised at all. Your talented pen is a sure thing with this style, Brooke. A joy to read this one and envision.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009

Indy, two is all there is for now! :-D Thanks so much, Brooke :-)

Comment from Algernon

Excellent

Perfect. It is great to see the cygnets once they hatch.
I know of an ugly duckling. One upon a time, there was a very ugly duckling..... And I divorced her. lol.
Just think, many will be incubating at this mo. And the mummy swan with be sitting on them.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009

Well, that was just mean! LOL Thanks for your fun comments, Brooke :-)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is a beautiful haiku you have describe the image perfectly with the limitations of the form giving it a meaning well done regards Fuller

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009

Fuller, thank you for your kind review, Brooke :-)

Comment from davidray

Excellent

If raised with the unconditional love one deserves, any baby can transform into the most beautiful of swans, right, Brooke? Loved your take on this. Terrific message.
Always,
David

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009

David, you got it! thanks, Brooke :-)

Comment from glacierbabe

Excellent

This one has great imagery. Is there really such a thing as an ugly duckling? I guess beauty is in the eye of the beholder. You are doing great with the haiku. Very nice. :)

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2009

I like animals that are "ugly" as I always think they're so cute in their ugliness - and they all have sweet spirits! Thanks, Brooke :-)