CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from sara-beth
Very interesting thoughts! I think you are right, there is no way to define the many forms of art, but it definitely defines us! What a cool poem.
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Very interesting thoughts! I think you are right, there is no way to define the many forms of art, but it definitely defines us! What a cool poem.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from rhymelord
Ah Ha! Now we are really into renaissance matters. Seriously, this is, apart from being a nicely flowing poem, a profound statement. Forget the Renaissance. Look out Greek philosophers.
Regards
Reg
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Ah Ha! Now we are really into renaissance matters. Seriously, this is, apart from being a nicely flowing poem, a profound statement. Forget the Renaissance. Look out Greek philosophers.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from honeytree
This art work is special that shows us the art work of humankind.
Unfortunately many human beings cannot define the art.
I guess this can happen.
Enjoyable to read.
Honeytree.
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This art work is special that shows us the art work of humankind.
Unfortunately many human beings cannot define the art.
I guess this can happen.
Enjoyable to read.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
Comment from medicnate
Great poem here. Thank you for all of the background on the picture. I didn't know any of that. This is one of those poems that celebrates life. I like it.
~medicnate~
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Great poem here. Thank you for all of the background on the picture. I didn't know any of that. This is one of those poems that celebrates life. I like it.
~medicnate~
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from yachtworknz
Sixteezkit-What a great short, short.
Art
Defines
Existence
Of humankind
But humankind cannot define the arts
How cool is that?
Cheers
Scott
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Sixteezkit-What a great short, short.
Art
Defines
Existence
Of humankind
But humankind cannot define the arts
How cool is that?
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from mmichelle97219
That but in the last line just kills me. there is a stronger way to say that last line without it. I know there is. Good luck in the contest. You should do well
Happy Writing
Michelle
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2009
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That but in the last line just kills me. there is a stronger way to say that last line without it. I know there is. Good luck in the contest. You should do well
Happy Writing
Michelle
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2009
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See...there goes the "Oh, no...here comes Michelle again" LOL!!! You were so right! After you pointed it out, I couldn't live with the "but" anymore! I've put in "Yet". What do you think? I do trust your judgment on these things. Thanks so much for your very honest and helpful review. Sue :-))
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that does sound a lot better. I have upgraded the rating
Michelle
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Always appreciate your close reads and help!
Comment from rmdelta
sue, very nice writing, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this one because I could understand the message. I still don't understand why it is called poetry, however. But never mind me.
Reggie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2009
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sue, very nice writing, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed this one because I could understand the message. I still don't understand why it is called poetry, however. But never mind me.
Reggie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2009
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Your review of not understanding why it is called poetry is "EXHIBIT 1" in the case made by this very poem. :-)) Glad you liked it, Reg
Comment from AndStuff
I never thought about that before, about how art defines us but we can't define it. Very interesting notion you contend for. Well written.
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I never thought about that before, about how art defines us but we can't define it. Very interesting notion you contend for. Well written.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from sharon fallis
An unusual subject, but very well thought out and depicted. Good bit of writing. I enjoyed the poem as it is leaving me thinking about what you are saying. Good imagery. Sharon
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An unusual subject, but very well thought out and depicted. Good bit of writing. I enjoyed the poem as it is leaving me thinking about what you are saying. Good imagery. Sharon
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello kid,
I enjoyed your intelligent and sophisticated approach to the tetra. Your words are meaningful and thoughtful. Thanks for sharing your well written poem.
Sincerely,
Whizpurr ^-^
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Hello kid,
I enjoyed your intelligent and sophisticated approach to the tetra. Your words are meaningful and thoughtful. Thanks for sharing your well written poem.
Sincerely,
Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
