Daisy Chain
Quatrain Poem about Young Love111 total reviews
Comment from Colette
Hello Again, I am a hopeless romantic and at my age I should be acting my age and not my shoe size I love this sweet and beautiful poem, thank God there are imaginative people like you to give us pleasure. Colette
P.S no need to reply just keep producing your wonderful work
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Hello Again, I am a hopeless romantic and at my age I should be acting my age and not my shoe size I love this sweet and beautiful poem, thank God there are imaginative people like you to give us pleasure. Colette
P.S no need to reply just keep producing your wonderful work
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Thank you, Colette - sure there's a need to reply - it's the courteous thing to do!! :-D Brooke
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Awwwwwwww!
A very nice, warm, sweet poem. I liked it very much and was left with the warm fuzzies after reading it.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
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Awwwwwwww!
A very nice, warm, sweet poem. I liked it very much and was left with the warm fuzzies after reading it.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2009
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Nescher, thank you - the warm fuzzies was pretty much the feeling I was trying to evoke with this particular poem :-) Brooke
Comment from raimie
aah the dandelion..I love the whimsiness of this poem. It dances before your eyes with visions of these young lovers. Great job Brooke should be a winner no doubt!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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aah the dandelion..I love the whimsiness of this poem. It dances before your eyes with visions of these young lovers. Great job Brooke should be a winner no doubt!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Thank you - I enjoyed writing this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Peter@Poole
This quatrain poem is so light and joyful, Brooke. It's typical of you, how you view life and love, how you strive for the light, emphasise the positive. It oozes with love, yet you don't use the word. Peter
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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This quatrain poem is so light and joyful, Brooke. It's typical of you, how you view life and love, how you strive for the light, emphasise the positive. It oozes with love, yet you don't use the word. Peter
Comment Written 22-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Peter, thank you for letting me know you appreciate this lighthearted look at young love. Brooke :-)
Comment from WordPainter
You're working on spring still with the flower themes. I love it. Daisies are one of my favorite, I carried them at my wedding.
The daisy garland crown was a nice surprise at the end. Queen of his domain. Young love, well done for the contest. I didn't make it to the voting booth in time, but congratulations on the win!
Lois
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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You're working on spring still with the flower themes. I love it. Daisies are one of my favorite, I carried them at my wedding.
The daisy garland crown was a nice surprise at the end. Queen of his domain. Young love, well done for the contest. I didn't make it to the voting booth in time, but congratulations on the win!
Lois
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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Lois, thank you for the congratulations - and for the lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from sherrygreywolf
There can be no doubt that this couple is in love and the word was never written. Truly a great job. I really loved this one.
sherry
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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There can be no doubt that this couple is in love and the word was never written. Truly a great job. I really loved this one.
sherry
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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I'm so glad you think the love shows through without being explictly identified. Thank you for your kind review, Brooke
Comment from jeslaf
This is a very happy, carefree, summer-day image you paint of early love. It brings a smile to my face, imagining that sweetness. :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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This is a very happy, carefree, summer-day image you paint of early love. It brings a smile to my face, imagining that sweetness. :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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Wouldn't it be lovely if there really more sweetness like that? Ah, I imagine a world sweeter than the one we live in. thank you for your most kind comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke...you wrote a lovely poem about love without ever using the word. The best part is you got your point across quite well and this delightful poem. It would be so nice if young love could be young forever. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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Hi Brooke...you wrote a lovely poem about love without ever using the word. The best part is you got your point across quite well and this delightful poem. It would be so nice if young love could be young forever. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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Ah, yes, it would be lovely if all love were innocent young love - that world just doesn't exist! LOL Thanks, Brooke
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Daisy Chain' is a delightfully written piece of poetry. This talented writer has penned a quaint, yet heart-warming work. It's a privilege to review a work that could be a lesson to her many readers.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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'Daisy Chain' is a delightfully written piece of poetry. This talented writer has penned a quaint, yet heart-warming work. It's a privilege to review a work that could be a lesson to her many readers.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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thank you for your lovely comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from DreamChaser
This is a delightfully charming tale of young love. (At least in the older days.) It brings back memories of that wonderful feeling that put you on cloud nine. A small souvenir such as the daisy chain, would be more treasured than diamonds. A beautifully written poem that clearly defines love without saying it. I love it.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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This is a delightfully charming tale of young love. (At least in the older days.) It brings back memories of that wonderful feeling that put you on cloud nine. A small souvenir such as the daisy chain, would be more treasured than diamonds. A beautifully written poem that clearly defines love without saying it. I love it.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
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You certainly get the value of the daisy chain!! Thanks ever so much, Brooke :-)
