Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Yes, that was a fun read. Good believable dialogue. Your story is developing nicely. I'm quite enjoying it.

"So I'd be meeting a stranger I can't identify out of hours..." Never heard that expression before. What's it mean?
"disappeared after THE Cambridge dirty bomb...."

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009

out of hours means outside normal working hours, i.e. not 9-5. Perhaps it's a UK expression.

Thanks for your review. Glad you cound it fun

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

This is a good chapter, I liked the way it read. I think it ran a little slow but I know its a chapter in a book so it all can't be exciting.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009

Thank you. yes, this is a wordy chapter. I shall have to get some car chases in soon.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Ecellent writing and I believe will even be more interesting and maybe dangerous, as the story evolves. I would have a listener for sure and perhaps some voice recording equipment.
I am looking forward in reading more.


Great writing.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009

Thank you. I'll try not to disappoint in future chapters.