The Listener
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Lunch with Ted"Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.
5 total reviews
Comment from Johnny Carwash
Glad I found this little gem of a book before too many chapters were released. This is so creative and enjoyable. Definitely has the makings of a sci fi classic. Keep up the great work, kind sir.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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Glad I found this little gem of a book before too many chapters were released. This is so creative and enjoyable. Definitely has the makings of a sci fi classic. Keep up the great work, kind sir.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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I think that you're the kind one. Thank you for your generous review.
Comment from WRITER1
Very good story, what's next, I think the characters in this story are good, strong and easy to read. After reading things all day that's important.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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Very good story, what's next, I think the characters in this story are good, strong and easy to read. After reading things all day that's important.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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Thank you. When I know what happens next, I'll let you know.
Comment from Stacey Lynne Wells
Wow, that was a great chapter. Very funny too. I really enjoyed reading that. Keep up the great work. I don't like chip buddies because it doesn't sound good. Did you actually know telepathy is real? Believe it or not, I can do telepathy, but it's not quite like what Laura said listening is like. Usually, it's like a computer in someone's mind and their thoughts pop up on the screen. I'm getting training for that. It's not easy to do, but I'm working on it. I am a better receiver than sender. Well, great job and have a good day. Rachel
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Wow, that was a great chapter. Very funny too. I really enjoyed reading that. Keep up the great work. I don't like chip buddies because it doesn't sound good. Did you actually know telepathy is real? Believe it or not, I can do telepathy, but it's not quite like what Laura said listening is like. Usually, it's like a computer in someone's mind and their thoughts pop up on the screen. I'm getting training for that. It's not easy to do, but I'm working on it. I am a better receiver than sender. Well, great job and have a good day. Rachel
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it, and forgive me for the artistic licence in describing Laura's version of telepathy
Comment from adewpearl
raising the ante from a raspberry Danish to lunch - that was a gamble! LOL Raspberry Danish sounds pretty good to me! :-)
We say putter around - you Brits say potter?? You are a strange people :-D
This whole trained "listening" thing is a great premise - and now it has a whole ethical philosophy to go with it that is most fascinating
good humor in the dialogue and intriguing science fiction
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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raising the ante from a raspberry Danish to lunch - that was a gamble! LOL Raspberry Danish sounds pretty good to me! :-)
We say putter around - you Brits say potter?? You are a strange people :-D
This whole trained "listening" thing is a great premise - and now it has a whole ethical philosophy to go with it that is most fascinating
good humor in the dialogue and intriguing science fiction
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Thanks. I'm glad you liked this chapter.
Comment from Adri7enne
Veddy, veddy, interesting. Yes, that read well. I didn't know that's what it was called but I actually saw a guy make himself one at the restaurant about a year ago. I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I whispered to my friend."There's a guy with a death wish. His arteries are snapping shut as he eats."
Good read. I enjoyed this one.
"Ted was standing in THE entrance.."
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Veddy, veddy, interesting. Yes, that read well. I didn't know that's what it was called but I actually saw a guy make himself one at the restaurant about a year ago. I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I whispered to my friend."There's a guy with a death wish. His arteries are snapping shut as he eats."
Good read. I enjoyed this one.
"Ted was standing in THE entrance.."
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Oops, thanks for the spag. Glad you liked it. I must admit to the very occasional chip butty, but never in a restaurant.
