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Comment from Fleedleflump
I think the word "waste" is used in a more true and fundamental way here than virtually any other context I have seen. It is a waste, and a shame. Two words that have come to be used blithely when they mean so much more.
Mike
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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I think the word "waste" is used in a more true and fundamental way here than virtually any other context I have seen. It is a waste, and a shame. Two words that have come to be used blithely when they mean so much more.
Mike
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Mike - thank you!! Brooke
Comment from Mischief's Momma
Great job Brooke.
The picture you chose is heartbreaking and goes so well with your words.
You bring up a very salient point - people have become so practiced at ignoring need.
MM
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Great job Brooke.
The picture you chose is heartbreaking and goes so well with your words.
You bring up a very salient point - people have become so practiced at ignoring need.
MM
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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thank you for your thoughtfulness, Brooke
Comment from justmade
This is really striking Brooke and the message came across really clear. I like the very direct nature of it and think people should take note of these things, we sometimes easily take them for granted.
Much love,
Justmade.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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This is really striking Brooke and the message came across really clear. I like the very direct nature of it and think people should take note of these things, we sometimes easily take them for granted.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Justmade, I truly appreciate your thoughtful comments, Brooke
Comment from ritareeact3
I'm out of 6's but this is deserving of one! Homelessness has always been my biggest concern about this country and I hope I don't ever become "immune" to it and it's tragic circumstance. Hopefully, this will inspire people to be more giving and thoughtful toward those less fortunate. Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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I'm out of 6's but this is deserving of one! Homelessness has always been my biggest concern about this country and I hope I don't ever become "immune" to it and it's tragic circumstance. Hopefully, this will inspire people to be more giving and thoughtful toward those less fortunate. Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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This is the "cause" I volunteer for and work on the most - I have quite a few homeless friends from the places where I volunteer, and they are people so worthy of our compassion and concern. Thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from bluefly
Hi Brooke,
This poem has a strong and relevant message that touches the heart and soul of anyone with an ounce of compassion for their fellow man. I think that many of us, myself included, have walked by another person in need. I believe the bible is correct, and if we honestly allow ourselves to reflect on the limits we set on compassion, I think we curse ourselves with shame.
Thanks for writing.
Scott
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Hi Brooke,
This poem has a strong and relevant message that touches the heart and soul of anyone with an ounce of compassion for their fellow man. I think that many of us, myself included, have walked by another person in need. I believe the bible is correct, and if we honestly allow ourselves to reflect on the limits we set on compassion, I think we curse ourselves with shame.
Thanks for writing.
Scott
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Scott - thank you for your insightful and honest review! Brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
This is an elegant piece of writing; its content is poignant, and sends a shiver down my spine. Your observations are quite correct of course. You have cleverly encapsulated both the plight of the poor and homeless, and the way in which most of us tend to deal with it - we don't see it because it's easier not to. I wish I had 6 stars left to give you. All the best. Kat
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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This is an elegant piece of writing; its content is poignant, and sends a shiver down my spine. Your observations are quite correct of course. You have cleverly encapsulated both the plight of the poor and homeless, and the way in which most of us tend to deal with it - we don't see it because it's easier not to. I wish I had 6 stars left to give you. All the best. Kat
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Kat, thank you for your most generous and thoughtful comments. I always appreciate hearing from you! Brooke
Comment from whotneckst
A good title and picture, how true, we pass them by...with downcast eye,how typical of most people..sad but true.good choice of words thankyou.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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A good title and picture, how true, we pass them by...with downcast eye,how typical of most people..sad but true.good choice of words thankyou.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Thank you for your insightful comments - I appreciate your stopping by. Brooke
Comment from babylonia
brooke,
i think people assume that if someone is in this situation, they asked for it. they never realize it can happen to them. sigh. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is good. keep up the good work`
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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brooke,
i think people assume that if someone is in this situation, they asked for it. they never realize it can happen to them. sigh. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is good. keep up the good work`
love,
barbara
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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I've heard all the cynical and skeptical responses - yeah, it's sad that people react this way. Thank you, Brooke
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i imagine you did. it really amazes me how people assume (assume) that it can never happen to them. it can happen to anyone. thanks for sharing.
love,
barbara
Comment from Firefly54
I know its the view of many, but there is something thatI dislike about the two lines,
"we walk in haste
past human waste."
Having worked with some of these people, I suppose I have simply learnt that far worse "waste" exists
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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I know its the view of many, but there is something thatI dislike about the two lines,
"we walk in haste
past human waste."
Having worked with some of these people, I suppose I have simply learnt that far worse "waste" exists
Comment Written 08-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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It is not meant at all to be my view - I work with homeless people in my town and consider many to be my friends. It is meant to show the attitude of people who feel that way and behave that way. I do hope that comes across. Brooke
Comment from LadyMary
This is profound in its reality of those less fortunate and oft-times homeless. Each of these individuals is a human being with a soul who deserves dignity in whatever their lifestyle choice. Your words stir deep emotion. Mary
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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This is profound in its reality of those less fortunate and oft-times homeless. Each of these individuals is a human being with a soul who deserves dignity in whatever their lifestyle choice. Your words stir deep emotion. Mary
Comment Written 08-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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Mary, thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments - yes, they are as human as you or I! Brooke
