Interlude
not every day is sunshine111 total reviews
Comment from Mike K2
Ferns are special to me as I see them in midday loving the aspects of the woods that are both dawn and dusk. They strike me as loving a certain color temperature. I enjoyed this poem and if I could only be allowed to bask. There is only one thing that I would ask...
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Ferns are special to me as I see them in midday loving the aspects of the woods that are both dawn and dusk. They strike me as loving a certain color temperature. I enjoyed this poem and if I could only be allowed to bask. There is only one thing that I would ask...
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Mike - I am so glad you enjoyed this poem - your comments are always delightful. Brooke
Comment from prodigal
This poem has your usual warmth to it. I like the first line allot. While sunshine's warmth and radiance. Very discriptive as usual. You have an unusual talent, and you are very versatile.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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This poem has your usual warmth to it. I like the first line allot. While sunshine's warmth and radiance. Very discriptive as usual. You have an unusual talent, and you are very versatile.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2009
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Tell me the title of the poem you just wrote so I can look at it after church if you've posted it. :-) Right now, I'm off. Thanks so much, Brooke
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Blow the dust off. I wrote it specifically for this site. It is not something I would have written if I hadn't found this site. I came here in part to explore different types of writing. I have always wanted to be able to write novels but I lack the discipline to complete them. I am a "get to the point" kind of a guy, which, I think is why song writing appeals so much to me.
Comment from Mischief's Momma
Great job Brooke.
My only comment would be that maybe on the last line a comma before and after 'by light" would pace that line nicely.
Anyway, a very nice and peaceful interlude. I think we need the shade sometimes, without it we would never enjoy the warmth of the sun anywhere near as much.
MM
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Great job Brooke.
My only comment would be that maybe on the last line a comma before and after 'by light" would pace that line nicely.
Anyway, a very nice and peaceful interlude. I think we need the shade sometimes, without it we would never enjoy the warmth of the sun anywhere near as much.
MM
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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MM, Thank you for your most kind comments and your input, which is always welcome :-) Brooke
Comment from lkeishal
wow, i am deeply moved. this poem truly speaks to me. i could feel every word. this is a magnificent piece.
"for soon the sun's rays beckon me." - I love this line. this was said nicely, it truly moved me.
i love it.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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wow, i am deeply moved. this poem truly speaks to me. i could feel every word. this is a magnificent piece.
"for soon the sun's rays beckon me." - I love this line. this was said nicely, it truly moved me.
i love it.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Thank you so much for your generous rating and kind, warm comments - I am most appreciative, Brooke
Comment from mushroom
a lovely poem and quite an uplifting one to me, i love the light and shade aspect and think you entwine this with life very well, nice work
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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a lovely poem and quite an uplifting one to me, i love the light and shade aspect and think you entwine this with life very well, nice work
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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I appreciate your positive comments! Brooke
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you're welcome
Comment from Carol D Parker
This is so simple yet so eloquent. And I love it's truth. We're sometimes drawn to the sun like magnet to metal. Our bodies must need that vitamin , I think it's D. I love your poem and love to read your work. Thanks for sharing with us
Delora
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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This is so simple yet so eloquent. And I love it's truth. We're sometimes drawn to the sun like magnet to metal. Our bodies must need that vitamin , I think it's D. I love your poem and love to read your work. Thanks for sharing with us
Delora
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Delora, I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments, Brooke
Comment from Isobella Munro
This one is also so well written. The picture fits the piece perfectly and I love the message of the reality of life that this poem portrays. I hope many people who are seeking shade read this. Well done, you're definitely my fave author!!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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This one is also so well written. The picture fits the piece perfectly and I love the message of the reality of life that this poem portrays. I hope many people who are seeking shade read this. Well done, you're definitely my fave author!!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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You've made my night with your comments!! Thank you so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from IndianaIrish
I loved this positive and bright outlook on the bad days we all have, Brooke. I always appreciate the best days maybe a little more having endured the difficult ones.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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I loved this positive and bright outlook on the bad days we all have, Brooke. I always appreciate the best days maybe a little more having endured the difficult ones.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Indy, thank you - your comments show you truly "get" what I'm saying, Brooke
Comment from tony bronk
I must confess, that I do not know the definition of bade. I even looked it up and it gave no definition.Does it mean bad? I enjoyed your poem but, I feel a tiny bit slighted. Tony
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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I must confess, that I do not know the definition of bade. I even looked it up and it gave no definition.Does it mean bad? I enjoyed your poem but, I feel a tiny bit slighted. Tony
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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it is the poetic or archaic past tense of bid it's just saying the light is bidding me You haven't heard a sentence like "He bade me goodnight" or "He bade me give him his hand?"
Thanks, Brooke
Comment from ersorenson
I like the rhyme and tone of this poem, and as always, appreciate you word selection. The vocabulary you employ is precise and perfect for the message. It's good to be in the light, but important to step back and gather one's self, before going forward again. Very well done,
Eric
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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I like the rhyme and tone of this poem, and as always, appreciate you word selection. The vocabulary you employ is precise and perfect for the message. It's good to be in the light, but important to step back and gather one's self, before going forward again. Very well done,
Eric
Comment Written 07-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2009
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Eric, your thoughts are most insightful and, as always, welcome.
Thank you, Brooke :-)
