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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from laurelp
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What a sweat looking picture. It is hard to write about a six word poem. As a cat lover and all around animal lover, I totally approve.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
    I am so glad you approve, I had to change a couple of times.
Comment from adewpearl
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I would not understand your story without the picture, but I'm guessing that on Valentine's Day one spouse gave the other a cat. Brooke

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
    He did, guess I should change.
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
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"Like me" - this line had a double meaning, I think and whichever way you meant for it to be I am sure other's will see the genius in yo8ur creativity. Great work.

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
    thank you maybe I should double check.