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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from babylonia
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the kitty is soooo cute. i have a new kitty. my female cat birthed four kittens saturday and only one lived. looks like she has a permanent home as daughter refuses to give her up. LOL they are so cute from six to twelve weeks. just kidding. they are always cute.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2009
    thank you so much
reply by babylonia on 21-Aug-2009
    you are welcome~
Comment from nora arjuna
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Kitty[']s new home? - thought you need that mark there, grace. so you got a kitty on a valentine's day? great one. all the best to you.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
    thank you so much, your right, I will fix
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
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Great. This says it all. What a superb Valentine gift, I can think of none better. Good luck in the competition. I hope you win. All the best. Kat

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
    thank you so much
Comment from bard owl
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What an excellent valentine gift. I was given a Persian kitty once for my birthday and what a delight Yoda turned out to be. He was my soul mate for 14 years. Broke my heart when he died. Excellent, instant-smile six words. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
    I just loved them, and I have a hard time, when they die, I have a 3. thank you so much
Comment from Minglement
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Well, as a cat lover, how could I resist this. Is this actually your new kitty, are you fantasizing? Fun read. Good luck - PS, if this is your kitty and he's all white, be careful, he may be deaf.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2009
    no it is right, thank you so much,
Comment from Karen B.
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Sounds like that was a special Valentine's Day for both of you. :) Great story told in so few words. Love the picture, what a sweetie! Karen

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
    thank you so much
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww did the kitty wear a red bow or heart or something?

sooo totally cute pic your selected too!

only thing i noticed was [kittys] <-- should be kitty's (with an apotrophe 's)

other than that - a great entry!

good luck and thanx for sharing! :-)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
    thank you so much, I will fix this
Comment from c_lucas
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a very well written poem with very good sentiment. A new born animal is like a new born human. They are fun until they begin to grow up and get into trouble.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
    that is so true, I had the lazy cat,
reply by c_lucas on 05-Feb-2009
    Teach her about the microwave. Haven't you heard about roasted cat. Some say it takes like chicken.
Comment from Vladilynn
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ohhh what an adorable cutie! a nice six words too! well written too!!

wonder why kitties are tiny!?

Thank you for sharing!!
Goodluck!

Love much
Lynn ( ^ ________ ^ )

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
    they are always so cute when they were little, princess, is beautiful.
Comment from Dave M
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Grace,

This is a good story in six words. Is the kitten a Valentine's Day gift for someone else, or is the new home a gift for the kitty cat?

Dave M

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
    for me, I loved it, Princess, great name huh