The Minute Poem
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Comment from nukrz
So honest and true Brooke! War is a place when people die for no reason. It is not needed and very unessacry lmao I cant spell today. We as people unite to protect each other but what are we fighting for?
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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So honest and true Brooke! War is a place when people die for no reason. It is not needed and very unessacry lmao I cant spell today. We as people unite to protect each other but what are we fighting for?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Quite often soldiers simply end up fighting to stay alive and to protect each other - and the people who declared the wars sit back in their comfy offices safe and sound! Thank you, Brooke
Comment from Gramma Kathy
This poem is sad and terribly true. I agree, those who answer the call to fight for country ought to be honored, but that honor comes at an awfully high price.
Your choice of colors is perfect for this somber piece, and I like the way the rhythm seems to march. Very fitting.
As usual, very well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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This poem is sad and terribly true. I agree, those who answer the call to fight for country ought to be honored, but that honor comes at an awfully high price.
Your choice of colors is perfect for this somber piece, and I like the way the rhythm seems to march. Very fitting.
As usual, very well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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yes, they are so brave and filled with integrity, and then they get blown to bits. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from Firefly54
Very different from the one I've just read on childrens art. The abruptness of these lines lend them power, especially, of course, in that final stanza.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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Very different from the one I've just read on childrens art. The abruptness of these lines lend them power, especially, of course, in that final stanza.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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I like the way the minute poem form creates this sort of rhythm and thought it appropriate to this subject. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from Kym Jade
Bravo. Soldiers are such a special breed of people. Thank you for posting this poem and reminding us of their character and possible fate.
Bless you
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Bravo. Soldiers are such a special breed of people. Thank you for posting this poem and reminding us of their character and possible fate.
Bless you
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Thank you for your kind review, Brooke
Comment from Curt Mongold
This reminds me that the only real reason for war is greed by one side or the other. My sister calls it a pi--ing contest, and I believe it. You penned a fine piece on the subject, the word use is great and the flow is awesome. How I wish it was a foreign subject to our minds though.
Sincrely,
Curt
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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This reminds me that the only real reason for war is greed by one side or the other. My sister calls it a pi--ing contest, and I believe it. You penned a fine piece on the subject, the word use is great and the flow is awesome. How I wish it was a foreign subject to our minds though.
Sincrely,
Curt
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Curt, after some of the poems you have written you write pi-ing contest??? LOLOL You're so cute. Thank you so much for a most thoughtful review, Brooke
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
I disagree. I think death IS defied by the simple expedient of FACING it.
It comes to you regardless, but bravely choosing to put yourself in its path is defiance.
(I had to find SOMETHING.)
:0)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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I disagree. I think death IS defied by the simple expedient of FACING it.
It comes to you regardless, but bravely choosing to put yourself in its path is defiance.
(I had to find SOMETHING.)
:0)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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You make an interesting point - I like that people can think about what I have said!! Brooke
Comment from Hurricane Dean
As a vet, I can say nothing but thank you for keeping in mind those that have given the "ultimate sacrifice" for this great nation. Gotta love you for that and that alone. Kiss, Kiss, Dean
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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As a vet, I can say nothing but thank you for keeping in mind those that have given the "ultimate sacrifice" for this great nation. Gotta love you for that and that alone. Kiss, Kiss, Dean
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Dean, thank you!!! Brooke :-)
Comment from Poetic Friend
I guess a minute poem takes a minute to read. Though the poem maybe read in sixty seconds, the reader can enjoy this one for a lifetime, for it is profound and memorable.
The ending is sharp in its message.
Brooke's poetry is not like a box of chocolate, for the Fanstory reader knows what he/she will get -- perfection (cliche, I know, but oh so true).
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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I guess a minute poem takes a minute to read. Though the poem maybe read in sixty seconds, the reader can enjoy this one for a lifetime, for it is profound and memorable.
The ending is sharp in its message.
Brooke's poetry is not like a box of chocolate, for the Fanstory reader knows what he/she will get -- perfection (cliche, I know, but oh so true).
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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I am touched by what you just said - I will be smiling all the way until bedtime hours from now!!! thank you!!!! Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
Indeed, death by war holds neither glory nor dignity, just a realisation that all the rest was show. A sobering poem, Brooke. Effectively chosen words, and I like the contrasts between each stanza.
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Indeed, death by war holds neither glory nor dignity, just a realisation that all the rest was show. A sobering poem, Brooke. Effectively chosen words, and I like the contrasts between each stanza.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Mike, thank you for your most perceptive read of my poem, Brooke
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Nothing prideful or pretty about war, that's for sure. And the only thing that gains is the Grim Reaper himself. Your poem is well written with no spags noted.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Nothing prideful or pretty about war, that's for sure. And the only thing that gains is the Grim Reaper himself. Your poem is well written with no spags noted.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
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Thank you for your insightful reading and kind review, Brooke
