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Dear Lexi

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Great Expectations"
"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from bard owl
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I know what you mean. The softness and scent of a newborn are such sweetness to a grandparent's senses. This poem, though short, give rise to such precious feelings of love. Excellent. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    Linda, you are so right. Besides being so preciously tiny, the scent is like no other. I believe it to be the scent of perfect innocence. Love, jan
Comment from JoAnna Lee
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Wonderful little poem. I know that Lexi will apreciate it some day.

As for the pixel thing... there is a free download at Paint.Net that you can size pictures with... or just as easy, Photobucket is a free site that you can upload you pictures to and they give you a code to post for the picture. Either one is fairly user friendly. I think I'd try Photobucket first.

Thanks for sharing,
I hope this helps.
Feel free to contact me if you have problems.
Have a great day,
Donna

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    thanks, Donna. I'm going to do that right now. then I'm going next door to visit my favorite muse, my granddaughter. love, jan
Comment from Mike K2
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So short, yet says so much and with a very nice image. I enjoyed this well written poem and like the format very much. Well done!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    thanks, Mike K2. love, jan
Comment from rmdelta
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jan,

great work and beautiful picture you chose to illustrate it with. I can tell it will be difficult for me to keep finding new words for I can use when commenting on the joy you're going through. I've pretty well exhausted my vocabulary. lol

Reggie

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    then use the same over and over, Reggie. I can handle it. love, jan
Comment from earthlybeing
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Beautiful. It is such a miracle to hold that tiny life and think of the future and all the joys to come. I know you are enjoying her. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    thanks, jeanette. love, jan
Comment from adewpearl
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great expectations - what a fantastic satori to a haiku about your brand new granddaughter as you rock her and contemplate her future - another great addition to your beautiful book
Brooke

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    I learned a new word today--satori. thanks, adewpearl. love, jan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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All I gotta say is don't set the expectations up so high that they are unachivable (is this a word?). Anyways, you are doing a splendid job with this

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
    she will be fine with me, don't worry. love, jan
Comment from tony bronk
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It is very apparant how happy you are with your new grandaghter and that is good.We should al have something to cherish and be happy for. tony

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    thanks, tony. good to see you again. love, jan
Comment from mtngalofnc
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Hi Jan,
I feel I've been given a treasure to be able to share such sweet and special moments with you. Your short poem radiates the love a grandmother feels and is a reminder of my special moments too. Such love felt in so few words. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!

mtngalofnc

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    thanks, mtngalofnc. you are always so supportive. love, jan
Comment from Dreamdancer
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Hello my friend,
With each one of these I read you send me back to the days of my son... Wow... Thank you for bringing back such wonderful memories my friend... Dreamdancer

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2009
    you are quite welcome, Dreamdancer. love, jan