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Comment from prodigal
I really liked this one, Brooke. I like the line I beg your pardon. :) I used to spend much more time in nature than I do now. Your poem reminded me of how important it is to get out sometimes. Well done- Sam
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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I really liked this one, Brooke. I like the line I beg your pardon. :) I used to spend much more time in nature than I do now. Your poem reminded me of how important it is to get out sometimes. Well done- Sam
Comment Written 27-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2009
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Sam, thank you - it is so lovely when you go back and review my older, non-promoted stuff. Brooke :-)
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I rate 4 5 or 6 stars only. Other than that I skip. I was in a bit of a rut and decided to just read something good. I do that with a lot of poets on here. I feel it breaks the monotony, and you can always discover something new about a friend on here. It's not always about fs dollars. :)
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well, you're just a sweetheart - there are people on this site who live for the opportunity to give other people a 2. LOL
Comment from ersorenson
Your poem conveys great thoughts of appreciation for the things we often take for granted, the sun and rain. I liked the rhythm and cadence of the poem. I think I'll dally in my garden more this summer.
Eric
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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Your poem conveys great thoughts of appreciation for the things we often take for granted, the sun and rain. I liked the rhythm and cadence of the poem. I think I'll dally in my garden more this summer.
Eric
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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I'm so glad you like the minute poem form - thank you!! brooke
Comment from Maurice WA Johnson
Short and so very sweet. And you are so right, we are all duty bound to stop and look, to breath in the wonder. Shame more do not feel that duty.
WHAT is this life if, full of care,
We have no time to stand and stare??
No time to stand beneath the boughs,
And stare as long as sheep and cows:
No time to see, when woods we pass,
Where squirrels hide their nuts in grass:
No time to see, in broad daylight,
Streams full of stars, like skies at night:
No time to turn at Beauty's glance,
And watch her feet, how they can dance:
No time to wait till her mouth can
Enrich that smile her eyes began?
A poor life this if, full of care,
We have no time to stand and stare.
(Leisure by W. H. Davies)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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Short and so very sweet. And you are so right, we are all duty bound to stop and look, to breath in the wonder. Shame more do not feel that duty.
WHAT is this life if, full of care,
We have no time to stand and stare??
No time to stand beneath the boughs,
And stare as long as sheep and cows:
No time to see, when woods we pass,
Where squirrels hide their nuts in grass:
No time to see, in broad daylight,
Streams full of stars, like skies at night:
No time to turn at Beauty's glance,
And watch her feet, how they can dance:
No time to wait till her mouth can
Enrich that smile her eyes began?
A poor life this if, full of care,
We have no time to stand and stare.
(Leisure by W. H. Davies)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
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What a lovely poem you have quoted - thank you so much for sharing that with me and for your review, Brooke :-)
Comment from kassey
These are two very cute, pretty and sunny verses. they remind me of spring and joy, all that is lacking in Canada at the moment. It is so nice to read something bright and cheery. Excellent Kay
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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These are two very cute, pretty and sunny verses. they remind me of spring and joy, all that is lacking in Canada at the moment. It is so nice to read something bright and cheery. Excellent Kay
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Kay, you are most kind - thank you! Brooke
Comment from chaswriter
Brooke - You are so right about priorities. Bask in your accomplishments and feel good for yourself for a change instead of dashing off to the next whatever. Nicely done. Charlie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Brooke - You are so right about priorities. Bask in your accomplishments and feel good for yourself for a change instead of dashing off to the next whatever. Nicely done. Charlie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Charlie - basking is nice sometimes :-) Brooke
Comment from ~Dovey
This is simple and sweet. A refreshing reminder to 'stop and smell the flowers' in a very subtle referene. This is beautifully rhymed and well presented. Good advice for all of us. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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This is simple and sweet. A refreshing reminder to 'stop and smell the flowers' in a very subtle referene. This is beautifully rhymed and well presented. Good advice for all of us. :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Dovey, glad you stopped by to leave such kind remarks - thank you, Brooke
Comment from tammipratt
This was just lovely. A huge message in such a humble manner. It just reminds us of the time we need to take to appreciate these things. Thank you for that message.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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This was just lovely. A huge message in such a humble manner. It just reminds us of the time we need to take to appreciate these things. Thank you for that message.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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I appreciate your gracious comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from LynnRadford
The light and meandering tone of this stresses your subject matter; everyone should stop awhile and smell the flowers. Lucky are those who make the time.
The rhythm really sung in this set of quatrains!
I read it aloud several times because I liked the sound and the feel.
Very nicely done, Brooke!
Lynn
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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The light and meandering tone of this stresses your subject matter; everyone should stop awhile and smell the flowers. Lucky are those who make the time.
The rhythm really sung in this set of quatrains!
I read it aloud several times because I liked the sound and the feel.
Very nicely done, Brooke!
Lynn
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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I am flattered that you would read this multiple times! Thank you :-) Brooke
Comment from jmyron
I sometimes think that people don't give enough attention to quality time to self. Bonding to one's self is just as important as bonding to others.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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I sometimes think that people don't give enough attention to quality time to self. Bonding to one's self is just as important as bonding to others.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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You sure have that right!! thanks, Brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Brilliant. Quite simply wonderful. Just those few short lines convey the joy of gardening successfully. I really enjoyed this poem. I can find no fault whatsoever! All the best to you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Brilliant. Quite simply wonderful. Just those few short lines convey the joy of gardening successfully. I really enjoyed this poem. I can find no fault whatsoever! All the best to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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First off, I love your name!! Second, thanks so much for your positive review!! brooke
