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If I have my Druthers

a whimsical romantic wish

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Comment from prodigal
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HA HA. Very cute. Druthers. I think the world would be a better place if we all had a little more hanky panky. LOL. This was cute.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
    Glad you like this one! It's nice that a younger reader can still appreciate this old-fashioned poem :-) Thank you, Brooke
Comment from ersorenson
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I thank ye for this poem. It's a really fun one. Very creative, easy to read, and good rhyming. I don't have much to say about it, except I really liked it.
eric

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    Liking it is all I require!! LOL Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from smiles
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Excellent. This is a fun piece.

I like the picture, it helped set the tone for your rhythm.

Good use of the word druther. Good flow.

smiles

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    Smiles, so glad this light piece appeals to you - thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from LynnRadford
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Brooke,
Laced with humor and well-put in your playful tone.
Different than I am used to reading from you, but not without merit.
Thanks for sharing.
L

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    Glad you like this bit of humor - thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
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Liked it. Has a little flirty air to it, like well-versed, confident love, comfortable in the knowledge that it is reciprocated. I enjoyed its intimate glance. Good one.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    Flirty it is!! Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from TerryRodgers
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I'm giving five stars. Excellent poem. The poem flowed well. Don't change a thing. I enjoyed reading it.

Good luck in your writing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    thank you, Brooke
Comment from Nanny 6
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Lol, this is so cute, and the picture tied in with your little quip about "making out" so well. I got a kick out of this poem...Judy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    Judy, who made out??? I saw nothing! LOL Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from davidray
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Ah,is this ever cute, Brooke.I enjoyed the words, your sense of humor and wit. Funny, this is the way my wife and I talk to each other on occassion, when we want to be silly.
Thanks again! :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
    David - that is great that you have that sort of playful relationship with your wife :-) thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Nedrajean
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Short, cute and to the point! Such an enjoyable whimsical poem. You have shown a light heartedness in this work. It was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
    I'm glad you liked this lighthearted romance - thanks for telling me! Brooke
Comment from Amicus
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Thanks for another enjoyable read. Your wry little poem made me smile. And I thought I was the last person on earth to habitually say "If I had my druthers..." !

As usual. your poem is technically flawless with vivid imagery. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
    Nope, I actually do still use this phrase too! :-) Thanks, Brooke