Whirligigs and Polliwogs
whimsical quatrains107 total reviews
Comment from raimie
I want to be in your garden, lol. What a cozy picture you have created. i am most appreciative for you sharing this. For all of us who wish we had a green thumb.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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I want to be in your garden, lol. What a cozy picture you have created. i am most appreciative for you sharing this. For all of us who wish we had a green thumb.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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I'd love to have this garden to be in!! thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from LadyJ.
Interesting poem. The picture was very good as well. the words that were used was interesting and not ordinary, I don't think I stumbled over any spags
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Interesting poem. The picture was very good as well. the words that were used was interesting and not ordinary, I don't think I stumbled over any spags
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I'm so glad you like this one - thank you, Brooke
Comment from Brandenpaul
I must read each piece I see with your name to it. Each one is so different-you just don't know what you're gonna get next. I liked the different word choice, made it fun and challenging to read. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I must read each piece I see with your name to it. Each one is so different-you just don't know what you're gonna get next. I liked the different word choice, made it fun and challenging to read. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much for that comment! I try quite hard to stay out of ruts - it is so lovely that you notice I do not write variants of the same poem all the time. (some do, and it gets on my nerves.LOL) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
First off; respect to you for the total lack of author's notes. Has anybody told you they aren;t words yet? I live for such things!
Secondly, and more importantly, it's nice to see the return of the obscure and whimsical section of your vocabulary, Brooke. Long my its resourcefulness continue!
Also, I love "And if a rainfall chooses
right now to feed the fruit".
Beautifully put. I am smiling :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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First off; respect to you for the total lack of author's notes. Has anybody told you they aren;t words yet? I live for such things!
Secondly, and more importantly, it's nice to see the return of the obscure and whimsical section of your vocabulary, Brooke. Long my its resourcefulness continue!
Also, I love "And if a rainfall chooses
right now to feed the fruit".
Beautifully put. I am smiling :-)
Mike
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Mike, glad to see you smiling, and yes, all the time people think I'm coining words ala Carroll and Seuss. They're all in the dictionary, but people write and either compliment me on my made-up words or ask me what they mean. Thank you for doing neither!! LOL And thank you for the lovely review, Brooke
Comment from rhymelord
I find no flaws. I think it's cute, but what the hell's a"bumbershoot". I really have run out of superlatives.
Regards,
Reg
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I find no flaws. I think it's cute, but what the hell's a"bumbershoot". I really have run out of superlatives.
Regards,
Reg
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Reg, you should consult your dictionary!!! It's an umbrella, and you're old enough to know that. LOLOL Thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from jack silver
this one was well written and i didn't see anything that needed to be changed. and i enjoyed the ending you had for it and look forward to reading more.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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this one was well written and i didn't see anything that needed to be changed. and i enjoyed the ending you had for it and look forward to reading more.
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jack
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Jack, I thank you for your gracious response, Brooke
Comment from laurelp
As always, very well done. I have no criticism only comments that I like to read your work. Thank you for staying active on this site.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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As always, very well done. I have no criticism only comments that I like to read your work. Thank you for staying active on this site.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem - thanks for your kind comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from kmeisenheimer
I absolutely loved the wording in this poem. It was so inventive. It really creates a lot of imagery. The words, even though they are not normal words, flowed very smoothly. I really enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I absolutely loved the wording in this poem. It was so inventive. It really creates a lot of imagery. The words, even though they are not normal words, flowed very smoothly. I really enjoyed it!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I'm happy you enjoyed my use of the old, obscure words :-) Thanks,Brooke
Comment from MJMuraco
Very sweet and charming poem. It was light and beautifully written. It flowed really nicely and I like the artwork that you chose. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2009
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Very sweet and charming poem. It was light and beautifully written. It flowed really nicely and I like the artwork that you chose. Great job as always.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2009
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I'm so glad you like this one - thank you!!
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like the light-hearted mood of this poem. The words evoke a feeling of pleasure , relaxation and positive expectation. I enjoyed reading it. kudos.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2009
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I like the light-hearted mood of this poem. The words evoke a feeling of pleasure , relaxation and positive expectation. I enjoyed reading it. kudos.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2009
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I'm so glad you like this one as it is one of my all-time favorites. Thanks so much, Brooke
