Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

skye, well I do not know what the required words are, but this is really a great poem. Very witty and cleverly crafted. wonderful rhyme scheme and flows beautifully..best wishes on the contest..jlsavell

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it so much. Makes writing so much fun, to hear how it impacts someone else.

Comment from Rabianabian

Exceptional

This is an EXCELLENT poem!!! It well describes the captain of the ship and his personality, which I love. The picture fits perfectly as well. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it so much. Makes writing so much fun, to hear how it impacts someone else. I really am grateful for the stars.

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

View good, rhythmic, and well told. I liked the story form, and it read easy. The captain seemed to be an easy sort. I find no revision necessary.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it so much. Makes writing so much fun, to hear how it impacts someone else.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

clever way to fit in Zimbabwe!! also clever use of kangaroo - like how you think out of the box. This is a fun poem that uses the challenge words, which were bizarre words, quite well without making the poem sound ridiculous! Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it so much. Makes writing so much fun, to hear how it impacts someone else.

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this poem is written in fine form and format. Your words flow well within its tale of p[poetic thoughts. I liked everything about this well written poetic tale of sea faring. This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it so much. Makes writing so much fun, to hear how it impacts someone else.

Comment from chaswriter

Excellent

skye - Your creativity certainly shows in this poem of sailing seas and adventures. I like your visual descriptives that you paint. Well done and good luck in the contest. Charlie

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it.