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Cinnamon Bread

a bit of whimsy

109 total reviews 
Comment from Kym Jade
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All our minds need time to rest and refuel.I enjoyed this little piece and to tell the truth it made me want the same.

Blessings

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
    thank you for such a warm comment, Brooke
Comment from grassroots08
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You managed to do both. Very cool. What could be seen as your distraction became your own delight, You ate the poem you dreamed about, when you put those words to flight. Cheers, Don

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
    Don, thank you so much for letting me know how much you like this whimsical little poem. Brooke :-)
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
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Well, yum! What a great idea when the muse is temporarily idle :-) Well written, no corrections - now I'm hungry for a cinnamon - bagel :-) good job here!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
    Glad you enjoyed a chance to get hungry! :-) Brooke
Comment from Avid Aspirant
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Ok. I didn't realise this one was yours when I opened it to review it. I know I said I'd leave alone but I must say, once again, congratulations on this! I loved it.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this light piece, thank you, Brooke
Comment from Daizie
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Okay...I haven't had breakfast yet. This sounds delicious. Unfortunately, they don't have cinnamon bread in the cafeteria at my workplace. Maybe I can find a cinnamon bun? This poem is light and cheery. I like the picture you have chosen too. Very nice.

Warm regards,
Daizie

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    cinnamon buns are darned good too! Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
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This reminds me of the poetry one gets in children's compilations; simple, pretty, and about everyday things. I'm sure you realise that I'm not trying to insult you by saying that; reading this felt like wiping one's mouth with a lemon-scented wipe after eating a KFC. I'm sure I'll be back on the burgers soon enough, but for now I enjoyed the lighter side of poetry, so thankyou :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    It is a light little piece - I'm not insulted at all - if I tried for earth shattering philosophy every time I wrote I'd drive myself crazy! LOL Thank you, Brooke
Comment from cmclellan
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Very cute and funny. Mt stomach is a-growling. I know exactly what you mean here. You've conveyed your message in a humorous and fun way. Thanks. No suggestions.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Thank you for finding some enjoyment in my light piece, Brooke
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Oh, lovely! You opt for cinnamon bread and I for chocolate. There's always something which stirs up those words, and it seems it's always sweet food! Very enjoyable indeed my friend; glad I popped in to your p'folio - seem to keep missing your stuff on the listing! xoxoxoxoxoxoxxo

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    oh, chocolate is also my weakness, don't worry. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from Helvi2
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Hi Brooke,
Gosh! Cinnamon and sugar on buttered toast. I haven't had that for so long. I love it with a hot cup of coffee.
I don't think you have to worry about having no poem to offer. Your creative spirit oveflows with wonderful thoughts and ideas. I'm so glad you decided to write at FS.

Smiles and Hugs,
Helvi :o)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Helvi, that is such a sweet thing to say - thank you :-) Brooke
reply by Helvi2 on 11-Jan-2009
    You're welcome, I always enjoy what you write. I am a definite fan :o)
Comment from Terror2s
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Sounds like a lovely decadent Sunday morning. Bring some over here please. This reminded me of my camp days where we'd make that sugary cinnamin bread. Terror

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    I'm so glad this brought back good memories - thank you, Brooke