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Comment from Aussie
Excellent tribute to a returned serviceman. 'They shall not grow old as we that are left grow old; age shall not weary them nor the years condemn. At the going down of the sun and in the morning, we shall remember them: Lest We Forget. Thank you for sharing this inspiration from Wyeth's painting - Portrait of a Veteran.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Excellent tribute to a returned serviceman. 'They shall not grow old as we that are left grow old; age shall not weary them nor the years condemn. At the going down of the sun and in the morning, we shall remember them: Lest We Forget. Thank you for sharing this inspiration from Wyeth's painting - Portrait of a Veteran.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Your lovely comments are most appreciated, Brooke
Comment from Paradox Tremors
There is no wrong in protesting. War is ugly. I just can't forgive those who hates the "soldier" for doing what they have been order to do. Our soldiers deserves our respect and understanding. If we dislike a war, there are ways to voice our opinions peacefully and through election -- part of the reason I believe Obama was elected (not because of color).
Well written piece and a joy to read my friend. Wish I had a "six" to give ya.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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There is no wrong in protesting. War is ugly. I just can't forgive those who hates the "soldier" for doing what they have been order to do. Our soldiers deserves our respect and understanding. If we dislike a war, there are ways to voice our opinions peacefully and through election -- part of the reason I believe Obama was elected (not because of color).
Well written piece and a joy to read my friend. Wish I had a "six" to give ya.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much for your most thoughtful comments and kind review, Brooke
Comment from ulster3
Hello Dewpearl.
I'm with you there! I don't think I've seen this one. must get myself to the Wyeth museum. Now here is something I get mixed up on. In Brit speak all Americans are Yanks. I know that isn't so. Is a Yank from north or south? Great poem, and it got me all involved as you can see. Fondly.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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Hello Dewpearl.
I'm with you there! I don't think I've seen this one. must get myself to the Wyeth museum. Now here is something I get mixed up on. In Brit speak all Americans are Yanks. I know that isn't so. Is a Yank from north or south? Great poem, and it got me all involved as you can see. Fondly.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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A Yank is a New Englander, this one from Maine. Thank you, Brooke :-)
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Thanks for info.
Comment from judiblaze
It just goes to show that a simple few words can be so effective. I like that you wrote it about a painting that has impressed you so. I can't find a thing I would change.
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It just goes to show that a simple few words can be so effective. I like that you wrote it about a painting that has impressed you so. I can't find a thing I would change.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much, Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
These are such emotional
heart-felt words to describe
the pride of a soldier who
fought for country and our
freedom.
Cleverly presented, my friend.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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These are such emotional
heart-felt words to describe
the pride of a soldier who
fought for country and our
freedom.
Cleverly presented, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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Margaret, thank you so much, Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
You write of times of yore when
patriotism was in the air, and
we fought those wars to end all
wars. You write of the pride of
the men who volunteered to shed
their blood to save a way of life.
Your writing preserves a time of
grace and pride now tucked away
in the attics of our minds.
Well done
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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You write of times of yore when
patriotism was in the air, and
we fought those wars to end all
wars. You write of the pride of
the men who volunteered to shed
their blood to save a way of life.
Your writing preserves a time of
grace and pride now tucked away
in the attics of our minds.
Well done
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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You comments are most perceptive and thoughtful - thank you, Brooke
Comment from Sissy Holly Grace
i have my uncles ww1 medals from that war and I am also very proud of him You have written in a few lines a brilliant description of this person. what a horrible war it was and we must never forget their sacrifices.Thank you for an inspiring poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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i have my uncles ww1 medals from that war and I am also very proud of him You have written in a few lines a brilliant description of this person. what a horrible war it was and we must never forget their sacrifices.Thank you for an inspiring poem.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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You're most welcome - and thank you for a lovely review, Brooke
Comment from Summer Falls
"grit and grace" I love your choice of words in this poem. You are quite the expert on this style! I really enjoy your stuff!
summergirl
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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"grit and grace" I love your choice of words in this poem. You are quite the expert on this style! I really enjoy your stuff!
summergirl
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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thank you - that particular line was the most difficult to come up with, so I'm so glad you like it, Brooke
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you are welcome
Comment from womanwriter
Dear adewpearl,
you do both the picture and the soldiers honor.
Nicely written, and perfectly picturesque.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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Dear adewpearl,
you do both the picture and the soldiers honor.
Nicely written, and perfectly picturesque.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much, Brooke
Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--Poet's verbiage paints a picture of
the consummate soldier: title, theme and imagery
as seen by the natural eye and reputation of this
calling. Author notes further validates "The Pa-
triot." teafor2
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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adewpearl--Poet's verbiage paints a picture of
the consummate soldier: title, theme and imagery
as seen by the natural eye and reputation of this
calling. Author notes further validates "The Pa-
triot." teafor2
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I am grateful for your gracious review, Brooke
