Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

hehe very good one
would love to know how the night ended
great entry and addition to the book
thank you for sharing.... and for fixng the chapter number too!

good luck in contest! :-)

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Thanks for the kind words, Shelley. I'm glad you liked it...and the night ended just fine (at about noon on New Years Day).

sherry

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Thanks for the kind words, Shelley. I'm glad you liked it...and the night ended just fine (at about noon on New Years Day).

sherry

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

Excellent! A perfect six word story, and oh, so common. But never you and yours or me and mine, right? Riiiiiiiiight .....

Thanks for the read! Deb

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Yeah right, Deb!

reply by DeboraDyess on 06-Jan-2009

How do I change my chapter # to be 28e28459563 or whatever instead of prologue? And how did you enter it as a poem? D

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Sherry.
Not sure if this clearly meets the contest rules as the 'New Year' theme isn't evident, though I guess they could have found a great way of seeing it 'IN', LOL.
Great fun anyway. Best wishes, Ray xx

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Yes Ray - Actually we did find a great way of seeing the New Year in...

sherry

reply by Domino on 06-Jan-2009

Good fa you, Sherry.
Any chance of some details, cos I've forgotten? LOL!!
Ray The Perv, LMAO, xx

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Ray - You are just B-B-A-A-D-D :)

sherry

reply by Domino on 06-Jan-2009

Hey, Sherry, I'm not as bad as I make out. Chance would be a fine thing
LOL, Ray xx

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

You've captured the passion
and the inevitable outcome of
that passionate kiss in six
words as required. Passion
always shortens the trip.
Well done

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Writing for this contest brought back memories long buried of my first love and the New Year's Eve that we spent together.

sherry

Comment from joan marie

Excellent

How many times have I heard that while I was out having a drink or two. Love this artists work. Great contest entry, I wish you the best of luck. joan marie

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

The problem(?) is - I wasn't drinking! Just drunk on love, I guess ... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

sherry

reply by joan marie on 06-Jan-2009

Your welcome, jm

reply by joan marie on 06-Jan-2009

I didn't mean you were drunk. I was just referring to have heard that phrase while out myself. No offense I hope. jm

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Good Lands NO, Joan Marie! No offense taken, at all - it's so hard to get across what you mean on this silly machine! I drink like a fish (sometimes), but this was just not one of those times. That's why there was a question mark after the word "problem" :) Having one of our friends yell that at us across the restaurant parking lot probably wouldn't have been as embarrassing if I HAD been drunk!

sherry

reply by joan marie on 06-Jan-2009

I have told a few of my friends to get a room. Sometimes without facial expression and voice inflection things are misunderstood. Just making sure. Glad to met ya. jm

Comment from JoAnna Lee

Excellent

Yes... that tells the story. I had to smile at this one.
Now if I can write enough for the editor not to kick...

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Thanks for smiling Donna - Believe me, I did too!