Comment from medicnate

Excellent

Ha ha, this was pretty funny. I like how you put dialogue in it. It is simple six words, tells a story, and also elicits feelings. It makes sense and follows the contest criteria. Well done.

~medicnate~

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my entry and let me know that you enjoyed it. Don't think it's going to win, but it was fun remembering the youthful exuberance of the moment and writing it down.

thanks again - sherry

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello sheery well this these 6 words opens eyes to vision a sensual evening
hope a room is near by
good entry
good luck
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009

Hi Gert - we managed...

have a great evening - sherry

Comment from Firefly54

Excellent

It's hard to find two and a half lines to say about six words! I'm sure you enjoyed this, your best New Year, thanks for sharing. Good luck

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009

Thanks for taking the time to read & review my work.

have a great day - sherry

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

which is why all the unexpected babies ... LOL i miss those kisses. sigh.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009

Thanks Barbara for reading and reviewing my poem. It was a night to remember...

sherry

reply by babylonia on 18-Jan-2009

sherry,
LOL i would agree with that one. sort of like my honeymoon night.
:P
love,
barbara

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

What a great entry for the contest. Young love? Ummm, I can't remember! LOL. What a great image you found to go with it!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009

I loved that picture, too. It's not quite what I was looking for, but it was close. As you can see by the last two pieces you read, before I got together with Bill I was a bit of a scamp! Oh dear, did I say I used to be?

see ya later, girlfriend - sherry

Comment from lizperkins

Excellent

I have read several of these six word stories. They say it all in only six words! Your creative mind just astounds me. I don't know how they will ever pick a winner. This is a hoot EL

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2009

Thanks El for taking the time to read & review, not only my piece, but those of the rest of the contestants.

Have a great day - sherry

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I remember being in school and someone would see two people kissing and their first reaction is to tell them to get a room. Sorry, good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009

No need to be sorry - the kiss was great! Unfortunately I was neither drunk nor in high school any longer. Of course the ribbing might have been easier to take had we been either! Oh well, after the embarrassment subsided, we both HAD to laugh.

sherry

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Oh, when people say that, the kissing is hot and heavy - sounds like you had yourself a good night that year - great six word story about your best ever new year's eve

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Yes, I did - thanks for reading - sherry

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Yes, I did - thanks for reading - sherry

Comment from Sue-z-Q

Excellent

Hi Sherry:
As you say in your Author Notes: Young love can be so intense - it's easy to get carried away. It made me smile and then I thought, it can be messy, too. So your story might have said: Passionate Kiss. "Hey?!? Get a rag!"

Anyway, I liked your story very much. Good luck in the contest.
Sue-z-Q

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Thanks Sue-z-Q for the encouraging words. Glad you liked the "story" - sherry

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I loved the art work.
passionate words

"Passionate Kiss. "Hey?!? Get a room!"

Your words were passionate alright
Did you have a good time?

Great writing.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009

Hi Honeytree - In a word, YES! After we quit laughing about our friend's hollaring across the parking lot at us...sherry