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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from adewpearl
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especially compared to your best one in the author's notes - it sounds like it sucked! It's six words, tells a story, creates a mood - pudding and all - works for me. My sister, with MS, eats one of those little puddings in a cup with her nighttime meds too since some require they be taken with food.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    it works well, thank you it is hard to just write worse, not best, maybe next time? thank you again
Comment from Domino
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hello again, grace.
Tis is fun and yet sad. I'm exactly the same except I substitute 'beer' for 'medicine'. LOL Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    thank you, think it would be better with best and worse, can not wait until you post yours, it is always funny
Comment from Jonez08
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Ohh you're breaking my heart, but an awesome entry, heartfelt for sure, I look forward to the day you share your testimony of healing, You've gone through and lot and yet there's always a smile in your writing, I hope you're better soon

Cassandra

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
    me too, thank you so much