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Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from
adewpearl
especially compared to your best one in the author's notes - it sounds like it sucked! It's six words, tells a story, creates a mood - pudding and all - works for me. My sister, with MS, eats one of those little puddings in a cup with her nighttime meds too since some require they be taken with food.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
it works well, thank you it is hard to just write worse, not best, maybe next time? thank you again
Comment from
Domino
hello again, grace.
Tis is fun and yet sad. I'm exactly the same except I substitute 'beer' for 'medicine'. LOL Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
thank you, think it would be better with best and worse, can not wait until you post yours, it is always funny
Comment from
Jonez08
Ohh you're breaking my heart, but an awesome entry, heartfelt for sure, I look forward to the day you share your testimony of healing, You've gone through and lot and yet there's always a smile in your writing, I hope you're better soon
Cassandra
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
me too, thank you so much
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