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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from medicnate
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I like this, simple six words, tells a story, and also elicits feelings. I like how they took many medicines and not just one, hehe. It makes sense and follows the contest criteria. Well done.

~medicnate~

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
    thank you
Comment from DeboraDyess
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Welp, those are polar opposites, aren't they. Been on both sides (except not on a ship). Much prefer the better to the worst! Good entry in to the contest. Blessings, Deb

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Thank you so much, this was a hard year for me, and I just had surgery, so I felt like poo, thank you again
Comment from Karen B.
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Not a great way to spend any night, especially New Years Eve. You've definitely told a story in six words here. Great entry in the contest! Good luck! Karen

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    thank you so much, I needed that, had a bad year, had surgure yesterday, so feeling like poo.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi wierdgrace
I understand the 1st and the 3rd line, but eating pudding must mean something to you
Pretty tricky six words to ponder on
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    No eating pudding, helps with all the medicines, sorry, been a bad year, surgery yesterday, and trying to feel beter so I came to my favorite web site.
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Jan-2009
    wierdgrace How are you doin and how do you feel?
    You are so welcome
    Gert
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    not good, but need to read a bit for reviewing. thanks
Comment from JoAnna Lee
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Yep... doesn't sound like much fun. Your best does though.
You told it in the six words. Good Luck in the contest.

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    thank you so much, I was having a bad year. had surgery yesterday, so not feeling well, checking in to feel better, thank you
Comment from Firefly54
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It's hard to find two and a half lines to say about six words! I'm sorry for this, your worst Christmas, but hope that you have completely moved on. Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    thank you, and it will get better, I hurt today, surgery yesterday. so enjoying reading others works.
Comment from babylonia
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LOL i like your author's notes. LOL it should be that way every new year's eve. :P
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    thank you , sorry, had surgury yesterday, not feeling well, but have to get better so I thought I would caught up with fs.
reply by babylonia on 18-Jan-2009
    i hope the surgery went well.
    love,
    barbara
Comment from Vladilynn
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mmmmm.....it's hard to have a collection of medicines!! LOLL
and having a sweet treat in the same time to fake the bitter taste of it...ahhh pretty much right for the sleep painless...ahhh how sad but what I can say~ Take care please....love you much!!

Me,

Lynn ( ^ __________ ^ )}}

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
    always try thank you
Comment from c_lucas
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Missing words: Take Medicine (ugh!)
Eat pudding. (yummie)
Sleep painless (overdose)
My sadistical interpretation of your brief poem. Good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
    i agree, but it is a have too, wish it was i, magery.
reply by c_lucas on 07-Jan-2009
    You're welcome, Grace. Charlie
Comment from shelley kaye
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hehe very interesting!

what kind of pudding was it? lol

good entry and adition to book

thank you for sharing and good luck! :-)


p.s. could you please change the chapter number from 0 to 203. thanx! :)

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
    did it changes to 203 loved the contest.