CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 113 "At First Sight"A collection of poetry
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Comment from adewpearl
My ex had long lashes - he used to lay his head in my lap and look up at me and I just looked at those lashes. What a great memory of teen love. :-) This is a lovely short love poem - when they are this short having a focus like this is an excellent strategy. Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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My ex had long lashes - he used to lay his head in my lap and look up at me and I just looked at those lashes. What a great memory of teen love. :-) This is a lovely short love poem - when they are this short having a focus like this is an excellent strategy. Brooke
Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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Now, YOUR story is a romantic one! "those lashes" :-)) Thank you for your review and compliments. Sue
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue.
in the pic it seems he's blinked and picked you up off the floor wiv his 'long lashes' LMAO
Blimey, I got 'brown eyes' and now I'm gonna stick some falsies on em. I always wondered what I had missing in my pursuit of the ladies, LMAO.
Very original and sweet senryu.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue.
in the pic it seems he's blinked and picked you up off the floor wiv his 'long lashes' LMAO
Blimey, I got 'brown eyes' and now I'm gonna stick some falsies on em. I always wondered what I had missing in my pursuit of the ladies, LMAO.
Very original and sweet senryu.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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Ray, you don't need long lashes! Just sweep them off their feet with your poetry! HA! Thanks for your very kind review. :-)) Sue
Comment from Hitcher
How did you know that I have brown eyes? Ha ha[I do] your a Goner all right! Very nice Sue, short but a very strong contest entree, or I'm just drawn in by the Brown eyes[I do] ha ha. Sorry, I liked it a lot Sue.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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How did you know that I have brown eyes? Ha ha[I do] your a Goner all right! Very nice Sue, short but a very strong contest entree, or I'm just drawn in by the Brown eyes[I do] ha ha. Sorry, I liked it a lot Sue.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Suc knows many things. I'll leave it at that..........
Comment from dportwood
This is the first short love poem I've seen that I liked.
Lovers gaze into each other's eyes and you concentrated on that. Very nice and good luck in the contest.
Duane
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This is the first short love poem I've seen that I liked.
Lovers gaze into each other's eyes and you concentrated on that. Very nice and good luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
Comment from fastdigits
First sight, lasting impression,
be it legs or lashes, stimulates
the lust and desire. your words
along with the photograph bring
out the message in those few short
words.
Well done
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First sight, lasting impression,
be it legs or lashes, stimulates
the lust and desire. your words
along with the photograph bring
out the message in those few short
words.
Well done
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
Comment from Algernon
Yay, I'm a Gooner too. ( That means an Arsenal FC fan) HAHA welcome to the club. I love Arsenal too. For 40 years. Truly a great love poem about the worlds best football team.
xx Andy, "a man of very small intelligence."
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Yay, I'm a Gooner too. ( That means an Arsenal FC fan) HAHA welcome to the club. I love Arsenal too. For 40 years. Truly a great love poem about the worlds best football team.
xx Andy, "a man of very small intelligence."
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Oh, dear friend of small grey matter
Those measles made you ONE mad hatter!!!
You Brits and Aussies with your "footy-on-the-brain disease" !!!
If it weren't for sex, it would be the ONLY thing that would mean anything to yuz LOL!
Luv ya, Andy.........
Sooz
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As one top manager said, footie is not a matter of life and death. It means far more.. HAHA
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LMAO!!!!! I have NEVER heard anything more INSANE! LOL!! You're killing me.....
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
What a beautiful writing, my friend. This is a great contest entry and you should do quite well with it. I wish you the best of luck, Sue.
REggie
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Sue,
What a beautiful writing, my friend. This is a great contest entry and you should do quite well with it. I wish you the best of luck, Sue.
REggie
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Hey Reggie! Thanks for the great review and compliment! :)) Sue
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Wow! Poet friend this was excellent and powerful. It reminds me of what my wife said when she first saw me. I'm kidding, I said that about her. I loved it. Good luck in the contest! Loyd
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Wow! Poet friend this was excellent and powerful. It reminds me of what my wife said when she first saw me. I'm kidding, I said that about her. I loved it. Good luck in the contest! Loyd
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2009
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Loyd, I'll take that "wow"!! Thanks so much! :-)) Sue
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My pleasure and good work.
Please visit my work when you can, LOyd
Comment from RapturedHeart
I had to do a double take and check the profile name because this seemed like a senryu by Peter@Poole! A senryu is a great idea for this contest! Beautiful, youthful sentiments - all the best in the contest!
Heather
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I had to do a double take and check the profile name because this seemed like a senryu by Peter@Poole! A senryu is a great idea for this contest! Beautiful, youthful sentiments - all the best in the contest!
Heather
Comment Written 04-Jan-2009
