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My Junk!

Just for Fun Y'all!

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Comment from IndianaIrish
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LMAO to you, John Thomas! Your naughty bits poem is like spending a great afternoon at the playground. Each stanza a fun ride on a different piece of equipment. LMAO Very fun and ummmm....uplifting poem, Borat. lol
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008
    Thanks Indy!
    I had a lot of fun with this one. We should get an FS calendar going with the guys all in mankinis!
    Warmly,
    Curt
Comment from adewpearl
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I couldn't resist, even if it's only for two cents! LOL
This is quite funny, and yes, you're right, in comedy, off meter can actually contribute to the humor. I'm not about to discuss the content other than to say it's entertaining.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008
    Thank you Brooke!
    This one was all in fun, one can't be serious all the time, Jack being a dull boy and al that rot!
    So glad you liked it!
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from Terror2s
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Light and funny. This was hysterical. Good luck with the contest. Excellent choice of words and the picture was eye catching. Terror

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
    Thaks!
    It was a fun one to do.
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from davidray
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Laugh my arse off. I enjoyed this, Curt, with your humor and play on words. Good luck in the contest. I just might have to enter. :)

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
    Thanks Davidray!
    It is a lot of fun to just let loose and say the things we sometimes think. I know I had a blast doing this, and may start another one here in the near future.
    Sincerly,
    Curt
Comment from SherryHo
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Hilariously funny! And I agree the meter is slightly off, but it works so well... you're fogiven. The picture you chose was absoluely perfect for your little tail uhum...tale.

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 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
    Thanks!
    I love humor, so it was just a fun little piece (no oun intneded!) to throw in the pot!
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from luna
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Curt,

This is a good entry for your writing prompt contest! Wherever did you find that picture - it's perfect! Your poem is humorous and well written, I especially like the last two lines! Good luck in the voting booth.

Yours,

Jenny *smile*

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
    Thanks Jeny!
    The pic I got online, isn't it just too much?
    Thanks for your comments, I always appreciate what you have to say!
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Well, this sure got me laughing! But not at the size of anything in particular ... not that I've seen it, or want to see it ... no, I don't mean, well youknowwhaddimean!!!

I thought you did a great job with Peter. Or John Thomas. What sort of tractor is it by the way? Some of these modern ones are quite small, but those old ones, now they're BIG and built to last ...

Sorry. I quite forgot myself.

Yeah, the meter is out a bit. But the content, the jollity and clever fun of this piece makes up for technical perfection. Excellent work, and thanks for making me laugh AT YOUR POEM about your .. er .. bit .. xoxoxoxoxo

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2008
    Thanks Chris!
    This was a fun ...uh...piece to write about, for sure! I can't wait to see what flows out of your pen on this one!
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from chaswriter
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Curt Mongold - That was a fun read and you had me laughing through the entire read. Good rhyme and you are right that the pace is a little ragged but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Charlie.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2008
    It was a fun entry, so I really didn't worry too much about metre!
    Glad you enjoyd it!
    Sincerely,
    Curt
Comment from Firefly54
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Hahaha - very funny indeed! But I've always said, it's not the size, it's what you do with it that counts... I used to know a man called John Thomas. His parents had wanted their baby to grow up tough.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2008
    Boy, I'd say! With a name like that, you'd have to be tough or die trying!
    Thanks for your wonderful comments,
    Curt
Comment from drivenbackward
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Very funny poem! I enjoyed this one. It definitely kept me hooked, wondering what taboo thing you would say next. haha. Nice flow, too.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2008
    Thanks!
    It was a fun contest to enter into, so I thought I would just have fun with the poem also!
    Sincerely,
    Curt