CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
great presentation and content too; touching dedication to your children; I suspect poetry was always within you, just no time to explore until now; well done!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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great presentation and content too; touching dedication to your children; I suspect poetry was always within you, just no time to explore until now; well done!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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astrolite, thank you very much for your lovely review. It must have been buried deep, yes. Most certainly had an appreciation for many arts, but no time to "participate"!! Love this site, as I have learned so much. And with much encouragement from those such as yourself. Very much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Scarlettdreams
Good for you, you go girl! I too love words and writing, I would guess that most writers do. smiles. What lovely rhyme and meter you have here. Bravo Bravo
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Good for you, you go girl! I too love words and writing, I would guess that most writers do. smiles. What lovely rhyme and meter you have here. Bravo Bravo
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from Artasylum
it's funny how puberty is the awakening point of so many phases of our life thanks so much for the good read..yours, diana
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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it's funny how puberty is the awakening point of so many phases of our life thanks so much for the good read..yours, diana
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Diana, thank you for reading my poem and for your very kind review. Thank goodness we have the ability to continue growing! With regards, Sue
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
this is an excellent piece of work, it is well written well presented and the flow is good. the words are very cleverly chosen, an enjoyable lighthearted read
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this is an excellent piece of work, it is well written well presented and the flow is good. the words are very cleverly chosen, an enjoyable lighthearted read
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from Lois Delaney
So awesome. I surely can identify with everything you have stated in the author notes especially. In school it was no chore when writing came up, but reading was another story. Ready was a chore until I grew into a young adult. Then my passion flew to higher realms.
We writer's have so much in common. Thanks for sharing this post, dear one.
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So awesome. I surely can identify with everything you have stated in the author notes especially. In school it was no chore when writing came up, but reading was another story. Ready was a chore until I grew into a young adult. Then my passion flew to higher realms.
We writer's have so much in common. Thanks for sharing this post, dear one.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from mamre07
I love this poem because it expresses how I feel. It is a gift with which we have been blessed. This language is spoken in a loud voice as we express all we 'wisdom' we have gleaned through the years.
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I love this poem because it expresses how I feel. It is a gift with which we have been blessed. This language is spoken in a loud voice as we express all we 'wisdom' we have gleaned through the years.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from E. W. Crowe
I was always fascinated with words myself, as I guess many of your reviewers. English was always easy, and I loved it too. Anyway, good job voicing this in a poem.
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I was always fascinated with words myself, as I guess many of your reviewers. English was always easy, and I loved it too. Anyway, good job voicing this in a poem.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from Kingsland
your note say to me. That we cannot view the forest as the trees are in the way. But I am glad to see that you found your way into poetic verse because it seems to fit you very well.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written piece of poetic art... John
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your note say to me. That we cannot view the forest as the trees are in the way. But I am glad to see that you found your way into poetic verse because it seems to fit you very well.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
Comment from Poetic Friend
I am so glad you find poetry, otherwise Fanstory woud not have the pleasure of reading your work. It's hard to believe that you just found poetry, for your poetic voice is strong and highly creative, especaily in the poem before me.
You were a born poetess, dear.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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I am so glad you find poetry, otherwise Fanstory woud not have the pleasure of reading your work. It's hard to believe that you just found poetry, for your poetic voice is strong and highly creative, especaily in the poem before me.
You were a born poetess, dear.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
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Hi Poetic Friend, I have neglected my responses due to the Holiday and family members here! Much to write. Thank you so much for your great review and your MOST kind words. I truly am humbled. I am so happy to be here to learn and meet so many people who love words and poetry! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
You speak poetry well. I loved this one. As I read, I imagined myself learning a new word and using it, feeling so "studious", above my level, for sure. Great job on this.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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You speak poetry well. I loved this one. As I read, I imagined myself learning a new word and using it, feeling so "studious", above my level, for sure. Great job on this.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Nice "second language", huh?! Studious is a very nice word! Thanks, El Gato for reading and enjoying this piece and for your very kind review. Most sincerely, Sue
