CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from thickwig
This is true art. I was first struck by the beautiful image that accompanies this poem and was delighted to find that it was an original by you. It lends such a haunting mood to this poem.
And the mood that the subject matter sets is excellently complemented by the minimal use of words to convey the meaning. Actually, for a theme such as autism, the number of words being so less magnifies the meaning more.
Great job and all the best to your daughter.
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This is true art. I was first struck by the beautiful image that accompanies this poem and was delighted to find that it was an original by you. It lends such a haunting mood to this poem.
And the mood that the subject matter sets is excellently complemented by the minimal use of words to convey the meaning. Actually, for a theme such as autism, the number of words being so less magnifies the meaning more.
Great job and all the best to your daughter.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2008
Comment from Aussie
Simple painting, simple words. Your poem expresses your interpretation of a highly misunderstood malady that affects so many people. Having a friend with four autistic children has enlightened my thinking and your poem has placed your daughter's fate in the sunshine of keening knowledge. Thank you for sharing.
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Simple painting, simple words. Your poem expresses your interpretation of a highly misunderstood malady that affects so many people. Having a friend with four autistic children has enlightened my thinking and your poem has placed your daughter's fate in the sunshine of keening knowledge. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2008
Comment from mamaboots
Hello Sixteezkid,
Fabulous! I love the picture, you have great talent as I see it is your own composition. It complements the poem very well. This tetractys form is wonderful for the message you have conveyed about autism. I'm guessing your daughter is very musical? I found this to be a wonderful piece and would never have guessed that it was your first attempt. I see nothing to change and have no suggestions for you. Thank you for sharing, mamaboots
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Hello Sixteezkid,
Fabulous! I love the picture, you have great talent as I see it is your own composition. It complements the poem very well. This tetractys form is wonderful for the message you have conveyed about autism. I'm guessing your daughter is very musical? I found this to be a wonderful piece and would never have guessed that it was your first attempt. I see nothing to change and have no suggestions for you. Thank you for sharing, mamaboots
Comment Written 28-Nov-2008
Comment from cmay44
Dear One,
Awesome poem and the artwork, color scheme and your author notes enhance it even more. God bless you as you walk with the lord - He will direct your path and guide you in His will.Thanks for bringing this condition too people's attention.
Love from
Carolyn
cmay44
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Dear One,
Awesome poem and the artwork, color scheme and your author notes enhance it even more. God bless you as you walk with the lord - He will direct your path and guide you in His will.Thanks for bringing this condition too people's attention.
Love from
Carolyn
cmay44
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Winslow
Dear Kid,
You have described the heartbreak of autism extremely well. How do we connect with those who don't respond? The mind is a very complex entity, even in those who are so called normal.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Kid,
You have described the heartbreak of autism extremely well. How do we connect with those who don't respond? The mind is a very complex entity, even in those who are so called normal.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Minglement
Would that I had six stars to give! This is amazing, touching, absolutely perfect! Wonderful illustration and color mood, as well. Great job.
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Would that I had six stars to give! This is amazing, touching, absolutely perfect! Wonderful illustration and color mood, as well. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from yachtworknz
Great short poem. Tough to comment on such a short piece but you did a great job on a difficult subjuct.
I would love a poem on the link between vaceens and autisim.
Great painting.
Cheers
Scott
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Great short poem. Tough to comment on such a short piece but you did a great job on a difficult subjuct.
I would love a poem on the link between vaceens and autisim.
Great painting.
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from jlsavell
SIXTEEZKID, THIS IS ANOTHER GREAT TETRACTYS..I WILL HAVE TO ATTEMPT ONE. BEST WISHES OT YOU ON THE CONTEST. IT IS INTERESTING TO NOTE YOUR CHILD HAS AUTISM. IT IS A COMPLEX DISORDER..I DID AN ACROSTIC MANY MONTHS AGO CALLED AUTISM..
THANK YOU FOR SHARING..JLSAVELL
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SIXTEEZKID, THIS IS ANOTHER GREAT TETRACTYS..I WILL HAVE TO ATTEMPT ONE. BEST WISHES OT YOU ON THE CONTEST. IT IS INTERESTING TO NOTE YOUR CHILD HAS AUTISM. IT IS A COMPLEX DISORDER..I DID AN ACROSTIC MANY MONTHS AGO CALLED AUTISM..
THANK YOU FOR SHARING..JLSAVELL
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Jendowoz
This is excellent Sixteezkid. I am a teacher and I come across Autisism all the time. I understand completely what it is about but how can you understand their world when we are not always there? I think your poem is a true winner.
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This is excellent Sixteezkid. I am a teacher and I come across Autisism all the time. I understand completely what it is about but how can you understand their world when we are not always there? I think your poem is a true winner.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from nukrz
My brother has autism too and there are so many different levels of autism that the children are very misunderstood. Lovely poem!
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My brother has autism too and there are so many different levels of autism that the children are very misunderstood. Lovely poem!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
