The Sonnet Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Red Rose"a poetic collage of my sonnets
175 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written sonnet, this seems to be your go-to style, but then we all have strengths and weaknesses, although I've developed that aspect of my style. This is smooth and easy to read, a pleasure to review and very readable, good to see you back, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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A beautifully written sonnet, this seems to be your go-to style, but then we all have strengths and weaknesses, although I've developed that aspect of my style. This is smooth and easy to read, a pleasure to review and very readable, good to see you back, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
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Bless you
Comment from Edward Escobar
I sincerely loved how you so eloquently infused those words to create a
wonderful Rembrandt that depicts such a great passion and I again felt this musical rhyme, certainty full of life.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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I sincerely loved how you so eloquently infused those words to create a
wonderful Rembrandt that depicts such a great passion and I again felt this musical rhyme, certainty full of life.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from roof35
This is certainly lovely and I salute your skill for I cannot write this wonderful type of poetry. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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This is certainly lovely and I salute your skill for I cannot write this wonderful type of poetry. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from poetbear
I like this genre.
Great photo.
You have gone beyond capturing the beauty and passion connected with roses.
Great poetic technique employed here.
Reads well and makes sense.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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I like this genre.
Great photo.
You have gone beyond capturing the beauty and passion connected with roses.
Great poetic technique employed here.
Reads well and makes sense.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Ekim777
Our poet bravely challenges the most demanding of verse forms and conquers it with her beautiful images. Her symbol is nothing less than the queen of all flowers and she wins it over to her way of thinking. I am sure she wonders what could be more beautiful in its completeness than the rose. And of course she is aware of the dark side, intrinsic in this flower. It is something all life has to face. I can't help feeling that the last line is a bit of a let-down. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Our poet bravely challenges the most demanding of verse forms and conquers it with her beautiful images. Her symbol is nothing less than the queen of all flowers and she wins it over to her way of thinking. I am sure she wonders what could be more beautiful in its completeness than the rose. And of course she is aware of the dark side, intrinsic in this flower. It is something all life has to face. I can't help feeling that the last line is a bit of a let-down. -Ekim777
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the exceptional review and the honor of a six. I am glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Yeltel - this is such a stunning sonnet, though I must confess I am not really up on the format itself - reading this aloud was perfection. It just slipped right off the tongue. Beautiful imagery, flowing lines and superb rhyme.
Thanks so much for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Dear Yeltel - this is such a stunning sonnet, though I must confess I am not really up on the format itself - reading this aloud was perfection. It just slipped right off the tongue. Beautiful imagery, flowing lines and superb rhyme.
Thanks so much for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review, Maureen. I am so happy you liked it. Live, Y.
Comment from emrpoems
An exceptional composition of the sonnet that through the use of eloquent language has created vivid imagery.
Great rhythm and rhyme
excellent enjambment
Sorry I do not have any sixes
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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An exceptional composition of the sonnet that through the use of eloquent language has created vivid imagery.
Great rhythm and rhyme
excellent enjambment
Sorry I do not have any sixes
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review and the virtual six. I am so happy you liked it.
Comment from Nosha17
Lovely imagery of the rose being compared to the bloom and joy of love and life. Good use of descriptive language and rhyming. Lovely picture. Faye
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Lovely imagery of the rose being compared to the bloom and joy of love and life. Good use of descriptive language and rhyming. Lovely picture. Faye
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review, Faye. I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate. This is another great Sonnet, you are so good at these and I'm loving this book of them. The imagery is vivid and deep and the rhyme shceme superb, well done once again. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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G'day mate. This is another great Sonnet, you are so good at these and I'm loving this book of them. The imagery is vivid and deep and the rhyme shceme superb, well done once again. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review, Chez.
Comment from Eric1
Hi yeltel, This is the most beautifully descriptive poem I have read in a long time, Your eloquent use of wordmanship make this stand out well from the others.
A lovely sonnet with excellent rhyming, rhythm and flow, absolutely brilliant my friend.!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Hi yeltel, This is the most beautifully descriptive poem I have read in a long time, Your eloquent use of wordmanship make this stand out well from the others.
A lovely sonnet with excellent rhyming, rhythm and flow, absolutely brilliant my friend.!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much, deae Eric, for the exceptional review and the honor of a six. I am so happy you enjoyed this. Hugs, Yelena
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It was a pleasure to review my friend
