The Sonnet Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Red Rose"a poetic collage of my sonnets
175 total reviews
Comment from justmarly
Life is like the leaves on a rose, it fades away and dies. Then the rose is the life after if we know the Lord who made us. We may fail here but up there we never will know failure. Thank you for sharing your poem. JM
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Life is like the leaves on a rose, it fades away and dies. Then the rose is the life after if we know the Lord who made us. We may fail here but up there we never will know failure. Thank you for sharing your poem. JM
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your exceptional review and the honor of six stars. It means a lot to me.
Love, Y.
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You are very welcome. JM
Comment from SteveY
Excellent job in writing this very insightful poem about the qualities of the rose which teaches us all wisdom if we have the eyes to see.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Excellent job in writing this very insightful poem about the qualities of the rose which teaches us all wisdom if we have the eyes to see.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review, Steve. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from ELumpkins
Great expressions throughout each line is very creative and rhymes very well. Each line flows smoothly into the next, it is a pleasure to read. The photo of the red rose inspired me to read the whole post, it was a very pleasing read.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Great expressions throughout each line is very creative and rhymes very well. Each line flows smoothly into the next, it is a pleasure to read. The photo of the red rose inspired me to read the whole post, it was a very pleasing read.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Tessa Kay
I loved the rich expressions in your poem like incandescent glamour and timeless reverie. If that had been a writing prompt, to use those two expressions in a poem, I doubt it could've been written more beautiful.
It put a velvety feel to the picture of the rose above.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I loved the rich expressions in your poem like incandescent glamour and timeless reverie. If that had been a writing prompt, to use those two expressions in a poem, I doubt it could've been written more beautiful.
It put a velvety feel to the picture of the rose above.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from MM lives on :)
What a creative and heartfelt poem yeltel.. Loved your of imagery alongside your poem as well as the formatting. I always enjoy a great sonnet you did a fabulous job. Thank you ever much for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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What a creative and heartfelt poem yeltel.. Loved your of imagery alongside your poem as well as the formatting. I always enjoy a great sonnet you did a fabulous job. Thank you ever much for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from weemick1960
I Love this piece. The language and the flow are just sublime as you take me on your vision of the rose. The sign of Love pulses with life through the words you pluck from your soul and place upon the empty page. O know nothing of form when it comes to sonnets but I do know what makes my soul sing with delight and this piece certainly does that. Your piece flows with the love of the rose,
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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I Love this piece. The language and the flow are just sublime as you take me on your vision of the rose. The sign of Love pulses with life through the words you pluck from your soul and place upon the empty page. O know nothing of form when it comes to sonnets but I do know what makes my soul sing with delight and this piece certainly does that. Your piece flows with the love of the rose,
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your exceptional review and the honor of six stars. Your words mean a lot to me.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is really charming. The choice of words is superb.
Beautiful rhymes, great flow and nice effect overall.
I really enjoyed reading it. cheers
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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This is really charming. The choice of words is superb.
Beautiful rhymes, great flow and nice effect overall.
I really enjoyed reading it. cheers
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your exceptional review and the six. Your words mean a lot to me.
Comment from Treischel
A wonderfully romantic English sonnet. Nice abab rhyming using colorful imagery and alluring alliteration, like red rose, virgin velvet vow, symbol souls, alas alarm, died discarded,
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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A wonderfully romantic English sonnet. Nice abab rhyming using colorful imagery and alluring alliteration, like red rose, virgin velvet vow, symbol souls, alas alarm, died discarded,
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from Matoshka
How very beautiful, so beautiful and so stunning. When I am in awe I cannot write what I want to say, except this is so soft and stunning. blessings
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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How very beautiful, so beautiful and so stunning. When I am in awe I cannot write what I want to say, except this is so soft and stunning. blessings
Comment Written 23-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your great review. Your words mean a lot to me.
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You are so welcome, my friend, just beautiful. Blessings
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for reprising this poem so that more of us could enjoy it. I enjoyed your alternating rhymes in this sonnet and your evocative, final couplet. You chose a striking picture too. Well done! Cheers- Joan
11/19/20: I had the same reaction this time but still did not have the six stars available that it deserves. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reprising this poem so that more of us could enjoy it. I enjoyed your alternating rhymes in this sonnet and your evocative, final couplet. You chose a striking picture too. Well done! Cheers- Joan
11/19/20: I had the same reaction this time but still did not have the six stars available that it deserves. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the great review, Joan. I am going to promote my Seal collection in the weeks to come - this piece is one of my favorites.
