Faith
A modern sonnet about how fortune can change.82 total reviews
Comment from Lynnor
Another wonderful and nice flowing piece filled with the sentiment of the faith that this poet has found. I enjoyed this piece very much. Sometimes the best things of life are simple, short and as we all know filled with enlightening truths, this can be called 'Faith' and this piece is a wonderful example of this poets.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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Another wonderful and nice flowing piece filled with the sentiment of the faith that this poet has found. I enjoyed this piece very much. Sometimes the best things of life are simple, short and as we all know filled with enlightening truths, this can be called 'Faith' and this piece is a wonderful example of this poets.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2008
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thank you so much for reviewing an older piece no longer promoted. You are most kind! Brooke
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Hi Brooke. You will with out a doubt be getting some reviews on some of your pieces that have been released for a while. I have been away working and just now have gotten to the 78 messages waiting for me. I still will be reviewing and rating these no matter what, even though I know the rating and review really has no effect on the older pieces at this point. I believe after tonight I only have 38 more to go,LOL.... Love ya, Lynnor
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you are most conscientious - make sure you review something next month once I get my nominations back, and I will be sure to nominate you finally!!!
Comment from peggysis64
Brooke,
A beautifully written piece of the journey back to hope and to faith possessing vivid imagery, a smooth read. No spag.
"But by compassion's warmth I have been freed
and follow in the light where hope will lead."
kay
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Brooke,
A beautifully written piece of the journey back to hope and to faith possessing vivid imagery, a smooth read. No spag.
"But by compassion's warmth I have been freed
and follow in the light where hope will lead."
kay
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Kay, yet another lovely review, and this one is not even promoted - thank you so much, Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
"The fragile flotsam of life's aftermath" - fantastic! I love that line; chilling, sad, and slightly angry all at the same time. This is one of your more beautiful poems, flowing very smoothly and lilting in its breathy dream...
Mike
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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"The fragile flotsam of life's aftermath" - fantastic! I love that line; chilling, sad, and slightly angry all at the same time. This is one of your more beautiful poems, flowing very smoothly and lilting in its breathy dream...
Mike
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Mike, thanks ever so much. I'm so pleased you like this one.
Brooke
Comment from raimie
We follow that star of faith do we not! What a beautiful poem and the picture is phenomenal. Great job with this one. I wanted to be sitting in that field, lol
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2008
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We follow that star of faith do we not! What a beautiful poem and the picture is phenomenal. Great job with this one. I wanted to be sitting in that field, lol
Comment Written 23-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2008
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Thank you yet again! Brooke
Comment from Gramma Kathy
I love you poems, and this one is especially tender. The rebirth of hope and faith is a beautiful thing. "But by compassion's warmth I have been freed
and follow in the light where hope will lead."
Thank you for sharing this. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2008
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I love you poems, and this one is especially tender. The rebirth of hope and faith is a beautiful thing. "But by compassion's warmth I have been freed
and follow in the light where hope will lead."
Thank you for sharing this. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2008
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You are most kind, as always. Thank you so much on this lovely Sunday morning. Brooke
Comment from Artasylum
the light is never to bright to follow and it leads us to the beauty and out of the dark...i look for and follow the light as much as i possibly can...yours, diana
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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the light is never to bright to follow and it leads us to the beauty and out of the dark...i look for and follow the light as much as i possibly can...yours, diana
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Diana, thanks for this most contemplative response, Brooke
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Oh, this surely is one poem which engenders faith in all who read it. So nicely put; no hearts and flowers, just simply saying: I have faith and won't let all that bad news get me down. Very uplifting my friend, and injects some hope into the heart of all who feel weighed down by the plight of the world! xoxoxoxxo
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Oh, this surely is one poem which engenders faith in all who read it. So nicely put; no hearts and flowers, just simply saying: I have faith and won't let all that bad news get me down. Very uplifting my friend, and injects some hope into the heart of all who feel weighed down by the plight of the world! xoxoxoxxo
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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thank you - you are certainly making my day today! Brooke
Comment from Karen Fay
This is a very nice poem and the art work is beautiful. I like how it flows. I enjoy reading your poetry and look forward to reading more...God Bless...Karen
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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This is a very nice poem and the art work is beautiful. I like how it flows. I enjoy reading your poetry and look forward to reading more...God Bless...Karen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Karen, you are most kind and I am glad you like the art as I always search for just the right choice. Thank you, Brooke
Comment from AWorkInProgress
beautifully written. perfect form. The bitter tears are followed by a message of hope. always nice to hear.
well done. ~Kris~
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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beautifully written. perfect form. The bitter tears are followed by a message of hope. always nice to hear.
well done. ~Kris~
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Kris, thank you for yet another lovely review - I just reviewed one of your works - you are quite talented and thoughtful. Brooke
Comment from PapaJim
Your poem makes a great point. If we can start a compassion epidemic, then love will follow. This writing instills new hope! Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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Your poem makes a great point. If we can start a compassion epidemic, then love will follow. This writing instills new hope! Great job!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
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What a most thoughtful thing to say -thank you! Brooke
