Homecoming
Free Verse: When Silence Says Everything36 total reviews
Comment from LadyMary
How true and aptly described as "when silence says everything". This flows beautifully with the surroundings allowing serenity, hopefully without intrusion of past negativity. Excellent. LadyMary
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How true and aptly described as "when silence says everything". This flows beautifully with the surroundings allowing serenity, hopefully without intrusion of past negativity. Excellent. LadyMary
Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
Comment from Hitcher
Resurrected memories shadow dance, very nice! I liked your offering a lot friend, describing the despair of losing ones mind and memories, my wife lost her grandfather a couple of years ago and I witnessed hid rapid decline, very sad indeed. Great poem!
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Resurrected memories shadow dance, very nice! I liked your offering a lot friend, describing the despair of losing ones mind and memories, my wife lost her grandfather a couple of years ago and I witnessed hid rapid decline, very sad indeed. Great poem!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
Comment from peggysis64
Mrs KT, I really enjoyed reading "Homecoming". It is very well thought out, choice of excellent words to create a vivid imagery with a strong descriptive scheme leading to a smooth read. My interpretation is that of the one coming home suffers from dementia/Alz. Such a sad thing. Well done. kay
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Mrs KT, I really enjoyed reading "Homecoming". It is very well thought out, choice of excellent words to create a vivid imagery with a strong descriptive scheme leading to a smooth read. My interpretation is that of the one coming home suffers from dementia/Alz. Such a sad thing. Well done. kay
Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Hello Kay! So pleased you enjoyed! Thank you! diane
Comment from EllieKaye
Hello, Mrs. KT-
This poem is deep on so many levels. I have read and reread it. I enjoyed its rhythm. The message, from how I read it, was of a relationship, long nurtured, finally matured. Please tell me if I am correct, or not.
I feel silly, but the word wending- is it a real word? I will go look it up. I had to wonder if you meant 'winding'.
Beautiful poem.
Take care!
Ellie
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Hello, Mrs. KT-
This poem is deep on so many levels. I have read and reread it. I enjoyed its rhythm. The message, from how I read it, was of a relationship, long nurtured, finally matured. Please tell me if I am correct, or not.
I feel silly, but the word wending- is it a real word? I will go look it up. I had to wonder if you meant 'winding'.
Beautiful poem.
Take care!
Ellie
Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Hello Ellie! Yes, "wending" truly is a word - and it means winding. So pleased you enjoyed! diane
I'm always open to new words- love it when I learn a new one. Thank you!
Comment from Judian James
I was just thinking about you today!! How wonderful to read your words again. It's been ages since we agonized together over our first triolets!! I've written several since then, and thought of you every time!! This is a lovely, sad, poignant piece about heartbreak. Lovely work.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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I was just thinking about you today!! How wonderful to read your words again. It's been ages since we agonized together over our first triolets!! I've written several since then, and thought of you every time!! This is a lovely, sad, poignant piece about heartbreak. Lovely work.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Hello dear friend! So pleased you enjoyed! diane
Comment from Puggle3
Excellent verse! Your word choice and imagery are terrific. You paint a mind picture that even I can see. I like capitals, but then this is free verse, itsn't it? Great job. Thanks for sharing!
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Excellent verse! Your word choice and imagery are terrific. You paint a mind picture that even I can see. I like capitals, but then this is free verse, itsn't it? Great job. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2008
