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Viewing comments for Chapter 184 "Which Shall It Be?"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from William Walz
A decent sentiment, if not very original. To excel in these six-word story contests, these expressions have to really reach out and grab the reader. Originality should be the main focus, and this simply is nothing new. We've all heard it many times before.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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A decent sentiment, if not very original. To excel in these six-word story contests, these expressions have to really reach out and grab the reader. Originality should be the main focus, and this simply is nothing new. We've all heard it many times before.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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This is what I was thinking at the time
Comment from babylonia
teri,
hate sure doesn't help things out. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
hope you are doing well.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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teri,
hate sure doesn't help things out. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
hope you are doing well.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
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Thank you Barbara. Hugs, Teri
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teri,
you are very welcome. i hope you are doing well. i know jon's death anniversary (that always sounds strange) is coming up. i hope you make sure to take care of yourself.
love,
barbara
Comment from NadineM
Teri,
This contest entry is so true! Your written thoughts are written from a Christian heart! Wonderful to read.
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Teri,
This contest entry is so true! Your written thoughts are written from a Christian heart! Wonderful to read.
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
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Thank you my sweet friend. Love, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
this was an okay statement
it is true -
but the "love conquers all" part felt a little cliche and overused (INO)
then again, that could be just me lol
thanx for sharing and good luck! :)
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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this was an okay statement
it is true -
but the "love conquers all" part felt a little cliche and overused (INO)
then again, that could be just me lol
thanx for sharing and good luck! :)
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Yea I think it is just you. Teri
Comment from c_lucas
A very good thought provoking poem with a message for every one. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest. L&H Charlie
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2008
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A very good thought provoking poem with a message for every one. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest. L&H Charlie
Comment Written 08-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2008
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Thank you Charlie. Hugs, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. L&H Charlei
Comment from becky7777
Hate causes violence. Love conquers all!
you are so right. hate causes more then violence but its only six words . you did great with six word story. good luck in the contest.
Becky
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2008
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Hate causes violence. Love conquers all!
you are so right. hate causes more then violence but its only six words . you did great with six word story. good luck in the contest.
Becky
Comment Written 08-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from earthlybeing
Well written and the words have great meaning. It is a profound truth. Loved it. Good luck in the contest. I pray you are well. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Well written and the words have great meaning. It is a profound truth. Loved it. Good luck in the contest. I pray you are well. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 06-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Thank you Jeanette. Hugs, Teri
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Teri,
Another six worder! I like these. They are fun to read and ponder over. The only problem is using enough words in the review! i HOPE i DID.
: ) eLLIE
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Hi Teri,
Another six worder! I like these. They are fun to read and ponder over. The only problem is using enough words in the review! i HOPE i DID.
: ) eLLIE
Comment Written 06-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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It is a lot more fun to read than review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from IndianaIrish
Fantastic six words, Teri! I don't have to stop and think about it at all...love is the magic. Best of luck with this wonderful entry in the contest. You did good with this one, Teri.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Fantastic six words, Teri! I don't have to stop and think about it at all...love is the magic. Best of luck with this wonderful entry in the contest. You did good with this one, Teri.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from RapturedHeart
You are very right here, Teri. And the older I get, the more I am learning that it is easier to keep the seeds of hate from sinking into your heart than it is to try to pull up the weeds once they start to grow. All the best in the contest,
Heather
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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You are very right here, Teri. And the older I get, the more I am learning that it is easier to keep the seeds of hate from sinking into your heart than it is to try to pull up the weeds once they start to grow. All the best in the contest,
Heather
Comment Written 06-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2008
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Thank you Heather. Hugs, Teri
