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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Minglement
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Very nice entry. Lovely story with an interesting image. One can always hope that in the end, this is true. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
reply by Minglement on 24-Nov-2008
    You're welcome. I meant to tell you that your title nicely enhances your story. Take care, friend. M.
Comment from Amyna
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It should be a message to the whole world, and beautifully said. Wish everyone realises that before the world is destroyed! Good luck.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Twomoon
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teri, a loving beautiful thought here, I enjoyed reading your expression of life in 6 words. Your mind works always in the kindness of your loving heart. hugs and much love twomoon

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
    You always make me feel special. Love, Teri
Comment from Terror2s
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Exceellent six word story that says a lot in very few words. I loved your accompanying picture too. Great job. Good luck. Terror

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from joan marie
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Truer words have not been penned. I like the kaleidoscope colors representing love and hate in the artwork. Good luck in the contest. joan marie

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
    Thank you for the review. Hugs, Teri
reply by joan marie on 22-Nov-2008
    Your welcome, jm
Comment from Vladilynn
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mmmmm...yes I guess you're right Teri, but sometimes the hate conquers all.
It's really hard to control neh? well, cause we're human I guess we've feelings that can't be forseen by anyone else.

mmmmmm....well done!
Thank you for sharing

Lynn ( ^ ____________ ^ )}

good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
    Thank you Lynn. It is so sad how the world is today and the way hatred fills the world. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Judian James
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Teri, truer words were never spoken and although this is not anything we don't already know, it IS perfect for a six word story contest. Well done

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from RaymondJohn
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Very true. It isn't exactly original, but it tells the story in six choice words, and you deserve credit for that. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
    Thank you Ray. Hugs, Teri
Comment from mslyla216
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Your sentiment is so true. Even without reading your bio, this story would sound as if you had learned this the hard way.It seems very personal and is so simply said. Good work. mslyla

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
    Thank you for a great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from eveeator
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I love your words, I think they are a very strong statement and made in just 6 words, excellent thought and a strong contest entry, I wish you luck in the contest and hope you are well, regards Yvonne

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri