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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Annmuma
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The best part of every day!! The picture is too, too cute and a perfect setting for the six word entry. You've got my vote! ann

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Ann! Music and laughter...two things I need every day in my life. Thankl you for your review and kind comments.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Janilou
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Laughter?the best part of my day.

What a great thought! Now, to find enough words to say about your six word contest entry so that FanStory doesn't tell me to think about what I'm saying, what I liked or didn't like. Nothing to dislike here. You made me smile.
:-)
Jan

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Jan! Thank you for your kind review and sharing your comments about this six word contest entry. I'm glad it made you smile!
    Indy :>)
Comment from nitad
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Laughter?the best part of my day.

It's not only the best part of the day, Indy, it will cure whatever ails you! laughter truly is the best medicine.
Another great six worder. Good luck in the contest!
Nita

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hi Nita! I do love to laugh and try to get as much as I can every day. Thank you for your kind comments and review.
    Indy :>)
Comment from skye
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Giggle, giggle, giggle.......
your six words just made my day.
Good luck in the contest, for this is very good, and the picture.. priceless.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello to you, Skye! Thanks for looking this over and for your kind review. Who wouldn't be able to smile at that baby's face? Thanks for your comments.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Writewoman
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This is a terrific upper and a good lesson for all of us. When we search out the positive, the positive will find us. The accompanying photo is also perfect. Baby giggles -- best part of life. Barb in BC

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Barb in BC! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments and thank you for mentioning the photo...who could look at that face and not smile??
    Thanks,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Teri7
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Karyn, This is a very good entry for the contest. I think we are supposed to have six words and I kept coming up with seven. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Teri! LOL....I know what you mean--when it calls for six, I either get seven or five. If it calls for five, I can only come up with four or six. Sheeesh. LOL Thanks, Teri.
    Indy :>)
reply by Teri7 on 01-Nov-2008
    lol
Comment from adewpearl
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Who needs 6 words after that picture??? You say a lot about yourself both with the choice of the image and what you say about the importance of laughter in your life. :-) Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    LOL...thanks for your review, Brooke, and for your comments. I do love to laugh...and who wouldn't smile at that photo?
    Thanks,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Domino
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Hey, Kar, you sure the kid aint got wind? LOL! It is mine too, so I often strip off and look in the mirror; always works. LOL! Nice one and good luck. Ray xx

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hi RayMan! Yup, maybe she does have a bit of wind to keep her laughing...but there's nothing like a little gas to get a kid (and most adults) laughing. Thanks for your review, Ray.
    Indy :>)