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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Nanette Mary
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Hullo IndianaIrish ...

I have been reading all the entries for the 6 word Contest and can't resist sending you 5 stars - both for your fine words and the beautiful picture at the top.
Now, I wish you well in this Contest.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2008
    Hello Nanette Mary! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this mini life story. I do love to laugh and I always try to have music and laughter somewhere in my day. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from William Walz
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I confess I didn't look at all of them, but this surely must be one of the best. Very sweet and endearing. I think you have a great chance of winning.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2008
    Hello WW! Thank you for taking the time to read this and for your kind comments. I do love to laugh and I can usually find some humor in just about every day. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Gramma Kathy
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Love this, but at least half the stars must go to the photo. ;) It and the poem are a perfect match - small yet smile-inviting. Let's make it five stars for each!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2008
    Hello Gramma Kathy! Thank you for taking the time to look this shorty over and for your lovely comments. I instantly fell in love with that darling laughing baby and I'm delighted you like her too. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from audmom
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What a cute picture to accompany your entry! I must admit that i agree whole heartedly. My kids and I have to have a hug every morning before our day is complete! Laughter is right up there!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2008
    Hello audmom! Thank you for taking the time to read and review this shorty. I appreciate your kind feedback.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww that pic is soooo cute!

love your six word statement - good addition to the book and so true!

thanx for sharing and good luck in contest.... and thanx for fixing the chapter number too! ;-)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello shelley! Thanks again for keeping this book going and I love reading everyone's six word entries. It's been great fun. I appreciate your review!
    Indy :>)
reply by shelley kaye on 01-Nov-2008
    just created another one today lol :-)
Comment from eveeator
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loved this, the picture works a treat with it and how true about laughter, great thought and contest entry and I wish you luck with your entry which I think is excellent

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello eveeator! Thanks for reading this and for taking the time to write such a kind and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Nicnac
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Your 6 word story is very sweet. I share in your sentiments.

The photo is an added bonus. It "shows" more of what you are speaking of - without adding words.

Best wishes in the contest. :)

~Nic

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello to you, Nicnac! Thank you for taking the time to read this and for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your kind words.
    Indy :>)
Comment from bard owl
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Oh, I know what you mean. A baby's laughter is the sweetest sound in this world. In fact, laughter is such a welcome friend in these times of trouble. Blessings to you and best wishes in the contest, Linda

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello Linda! You just have to laugh, right? Thanks for reading this and for your kind review. I appreciate your time.
    Indy :>)
Comment from starkat
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Hi Indy...that's a cute picture of you. Yes..laughter is the best medicine and should be part of everyone's day. It's good for the heart, soul, and general outlook on life.

I'm happy that laughter is the best part of your day. They say that a day without laughter is like a day without sunshine.

Well written and presented six word story. The adorable picture is a hoot and sets the stage so the reader can laugh, too.

Thanks for the laugh...;)
Good luck in this contest..
Should be a strong contender
starkat

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello Starkitty! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and I'm so glad it made you smile! I really do love to laugh, and often find myself wandering into the bathroom just to laugh at the mirror's reflection! Music and laughter ... can't have a day without either one of them. Thanks for your kind review, Sir Kitty.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Kit Minden
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Isn't that seven words? Laughter the best part of my day is a great story. Cute pic, too. Maybe you can just drop 'the' or flip the direction Best part of my day - laughter! Hmm..

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Hello Kit! Yup...I submitted the wrong version and you were the only one to count and catch it. Thanks.
    Indy :>)
reply by Kit Minden on 02-Nov-2008
    Glad to be of use!