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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from rmdelta
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Teri,

What a wonderful contest entry. You should do very well with this one. I am pulling for you. Fantastic word choices and used in such a powerful way.

Well Done, Terr.

Reggie

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you again my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Bryana
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Wonderful entry my friend, Yes, He's very
much alive in our hearts and souls. I'm so
happy your faith in Him keeps you well.

Thank Teri for remind us about Him.
I wish you good luck in the contest.

Hugs, Ana

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you Ana. Love, Teri
Comment from Arkine
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Unfortunately six letters are really hard to review, but hey I'll give it a shot. This pretty much sums up not only the feelings of the author but also seems to convey the feelings of the artist. Serenity with the "pray" and a hint of will with the "awesome". Nicely done.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you for the great review. I have to agree with you as I have reviewed many of these and it's hard at times. Hugs, Teri
Comment from LadyMary
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What a powerful writing! Volumes written in just six words. The artwork is so complementary to the writing. Thank you for sharing faith with us. LadyMary

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from yachtworknz
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Wow, how does one tell a story in six words? Thing is, now this is just me, the second bit, Awsome lord does not promte a story. "He answered" completes the story. "He lauged", that is why I went with four stars cause in the end the story was not told.

Thanks for writing and I'm looking for more. Cheers, Scott

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you Scott. Hugs, Teri
Comment from rama devi
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It is a devotional six word entry. Nothing to change or fix...keep praying!
The picture complements your theme.

*smile*

hard to write a review for six words

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you Rama. It is hard to review these. Hugs, Teri
Comment from eraserlynch
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Lovely contest entry Teri. I am glad you find comfort in your faith, those of us who don't understand why have to respect those that do. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. I don't know what I would do without him. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Kym Jade
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This is a great entry in the competition and we hope you do very well. Anybody who sings His praises can never go wrong.

Best wishes and dreams

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friends. He is so awesome and it makes me happy to praise him. Love, Teri
Comment from babylonia
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teri,
hope you are doing well.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2008
    Thank you Babara. I am hanging in here. Love, Teri
reply by babylonia on 29-Oct-2008
    teri,
    that's good to know.
    love,
    barbara
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
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Another wonderful witness to the King of Kings! His name is certainly "Wonderful," as your tribute to Our Lord is.
I guess you can tell I loved it!

Dave

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2008
    Thank you Dave. Hugs, Teri