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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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This is a great entry into the contest...good luck! Your message is simple, yet one that needs to be stated...and, yes, He is so awesome! Hugs and smiles, Susanne

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2008
    Thank you Suzanne. Hugs, Teri
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Very nicely done, Teri. I like these six word contests when the writers write something about their life and nothing in general. Makes it more meaningful.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2008
    Thanks my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
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wonderful story

so full of hope

and good use of the six words

thank you for sharing

good luck in contest! :-)










 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Teri
Comment from eveeator
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this certainly tells a story about your life and what a strong one, I am so glad you have the power of belief as it will help you work through lifes challenges and sadness, I think this is a strong piece and wish you luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from bard owl
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What a lovely picture to accompany your words of praise. This is an inspired contest entry that so many of us can identify with. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Thank you Linda. Hugs, Teri
Comment from empire76
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Teri, from reading your writings I know this poem to be true and says a lot about you. Another good one for the six-word storybook
Empi

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from RSayre45
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Amazing how six words can say so much! Each word means something and then again together they mean even more. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing, I like that I am spurred to new types of writing as this work does.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2008
    Thank you for the review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Terror2s
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Beautiful job in conveying your feelings with limited words. Good luck in the contest. The pic was a perfect compliment to your words. Terror

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from joan marie
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This certainly gets the message across. Picture compliments words. I think saying things simply often has a much larger impact. Great contest entry, good luck, joan marie

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from starman
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Whether it's praying or simply feeling the nature of the Lord by relating to nature and all that is beaitiful and peaceful, then yes, be happy.

:)s

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2008
    He does make me happy. Hugs, Teri