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Viewing comments for Chapter 162 "I Whoat Dis"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from wierdgrace
Enjoyable, excellent, and after I stop laughing, you wrote a great poem for the contest, found no errors, just great humor, and enjoyed it completely. thank you for sharing these wonderful words.
reply by wierdgrace on 21-Oct-2008
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Enjoyable, excellent, and after I stop laughing, you wrote a great poem for the contest, found no errors, just great humor, and enjoyed it completely. thank you for sharing these wonderful words.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by wierdgrace on 21-Oct-2008
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u r so welcome
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u r so welcome
Comment from Jnetgame
Very cute and funny six word story contest entry. It's certainly creative. I guess I won't review for SPAG :) Good lucn in the contest.
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Very cute and funny six word story contest entry. It's certainly creative. I guess I won't review for SPAG :) Good lucn in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from Jewell McChesney
You're too cute, girl!
This is great. The little six word story tells it all. I'm glad you came out of that stage and have so much talent and ability to write correctly now!
Jj
p.s. I noticed you at fanart! I'm there too now. (Thru_Her_Eyes)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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You're too cute, girl!
This is great. The little six word story tells it all. I'm glad you came out of that stage and have so much talent and ability to write correctly now!
Jj
p.s. I noticed you at fanart! I'm there too now. (Thru_Her_Eyes)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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HI Jewel, Your reviews always leave me with a smile. You are the Poet's Poet and I am extremely flattered by your kind words. I found you on Ron Howards site when I was looking for Lainee. You write poems with the Big Guys and write poems on request, so I am always humbled by your kind remarks. Thank you for thinking I am worthy of them. :o) I'll be looking for you on FA. HUGE HUG! Helvi :o)
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The Poet's Poet, eh? ME? Hmmmm.
Tell me what it is you request from my pen.
I'd love to hear your desire and give it a go!
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Love it! Love it! Just wish I knew how you added the color to your writing. I couldn't do it to mine. Got a chuckle outta it. Very imaginative. Best of luck.
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Love it! Love it! Just wish I knew how you added the color to your writing. I couldn't do it to mine. Got a chuckle outta it. Very imaginative. Best of luck.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from babylonia
me too~ LOL actually i just want to be published again. :P
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
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me too~ LOL actually i just want to be published again. :P
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from Lady & Louis
Now that's downright sneaky - doing a deliberately misspelled piece that can't be spagged! LOL!
Liked it, Helvi. It made me think of a cartoon animal writing it - a sort of Warner Bros critter.
Good luck in the contest!
Louise :)))
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Now that's downright sneaky - doing a deliberately misspelled piece that can't be spagged! LOL!
Liked it, Helvi. It made me think of a cartoon animal writing it - a sort of Warner Bros critter.
Good luck in the contest!
Louise :)))
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from Lynnor
This is a great little piece! Full of fun and oh so truthful for all of us to remember those wonderful days of learning, not just for us but maybe for and of our children. I think every one will enjoy this piece. Simply wonderful!
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This is a great little piece! Full of fun and oh so truthful for all of us to remember those wonderful days of learning, not just for us but maybe for and of our children. I think every one will enjoy this piece. Simply wonderful!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from phaedra
This one made me laugh out loud. A writer of your caliber
having SPAG and not using spell check (smile!)
What is the world coming to?
A great idea and post in this contest.
PS Received a banner for reviewing this. Thought I should
return it. Wish you well in contest.
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This one made me laugh out loud. A writer of your caliber
having SPAG and not using spell check (smile!)
What is the world coming to?
A great idea and post in this contest.
PS Received a banner for reviewing this. Thought I should
return it. Wish you well in contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from rama devi
Adorable!~ Very inventive entry for this contest. So cuuute!
I wish you best of luck. This one may win many votes as it makes your readers smile. (I did!)
Very nice color choices too.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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Adorable!~ Very inventive entry for this contest. So cuuute!
I wish you best of luck. This one may win many votes as it makes your readers smile. (I did!)
Very nice color choices too.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from sunrunner818
I honestly don't get it. It didn't bring any automatic visualizations to my mind. However, I really liked the font and color choices you made, they are interesting and add to the allure and imagery of a six word story.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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I honestly don't get it. It didn't bring any automatic visualizations to my mind. However, I really liked the font and color choices you made, they are interesting and add to the allure and imagery of a six word story.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Sorry! I was just kidding about learning how to write, but spelling everything wrong to make it funny.. I was hoping to give you a smile. I'm sorry that didn't happen for you. Helvi :o)
