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Viewing comments for Chapter 162 "I Whoat Dis"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from LadyMary
Fun reading, and based on the input, some lofty goals. :)
Looking forward to more of your righting -- oops! -- riting. Well done. LadyMary
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Fun reading, and based on the input, some lofty goals. :)
Looking forward to more of your righting -- oops! -- riting. Well done. LadyMary
Comment Written 04-Nov-2008
Comment from Maurice WA Johnson
A total joy to read. So similar to my daughter's handwriting! (And she's seventeen!)
No, not realy, but this is easily the funest entry. Well done.
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A total joy to read. So similar to my daughter's handwriting! (And she's seventeen!)
No, not realy, but this is easily the funest entry. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2008
Comment from shelley kaye
sorry, i don't get the last word :-P
"i really want to write"
is the last word "right"?
anyway, sorry just figured it out as i was writing it again lol :-P
good one!
thanx for sharing.... and for fixing the chapter number too! ;-)
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sorry, i don't get the last word :-P
"i really want to write"
is the last word "right"?
anyway, sorry just figured it out as i was writing it again lol :-P
good one!
thanx for sharing.... and for fixing the chapter number too! ;-)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2008
Comment from eveeator
I like your take on the six word contest requirement, I thought if very funny and yet it makes a statement that applies to lots of us here at FS, I hope you are keeping well and wish you luck with this entry, keep writing regards Yvonne
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I like your take on the six word contest requirement, I thought if very funny and yet it makes a statement that applies to lots of us here at FS, I hope you are keeping well and wish you luck with this entry, keep writing regards Yvonne
Comment Written 01-Nov-2008
Comment from Nicnac
Oh my!
This 6 word story entry is brilliant!
The way you displayed your entry is very clever.
I loved it!
I wheelie hope you do well in da contest!
Best wishes.
~Nic
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Oh my!
This 6 word story entry is brilliant!
The way you displayed your entry is very clever.
I loved it!
I wheelie hope you do well in da contest!
Best wishes.
~Nic
Comment Written 01-Nov-2008
Comment from bard owl
This is so cleverly done. Your words speak for all of us who are in love with words! Excellent contest entry. Your work is divinely original. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
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This is so cleverly done. Your words speak for all of us who are in love with words! Excellent contest entry. Your work is divinely original. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 01-Nov-2008
Comment from RaymondJohn
Cute. I thought of little Iodine when I read this. She was on the radio long before you were born, maybe before your parents were born. She talked that way. You added the visual aspect. Interesting. Ray.
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Cute. I thought of little Iodine when I read this. She was on the radio long before you were born, maybe before your parents were born. She talked that way. You added the visual aspect. Interesting. Ray.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2008
Comment from adewpearl
Hey, if you only have six words with which to express yourself, you might as well use them to express a life goal and make people laugh at the same time! :-)
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Hey, if you only have six words with which to express yourself, you might as well use them to express a life goal and make people laugh at the same time! :-)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
you know, Helvi2, so do I but I was raised as a mathematics teacher and it's one of things I can't seem to overcome. After all, they teach you that pie are squared so how the heck can they teach me how to write proper? Good luck in your efforts to lurn.
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you know, Helvi2, so do I but I was raised as a mathematics teacher and it's one of things I can't seem to overcome. After all, they teach you that pie are squared so how the heck can they teach me how to write proper? Good luck in your efforts to lurn.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I liked this it made me laugh very well done top marks for presentation and originality nice to see a six worder that isn't too serious I enjoyed regards Fuller
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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I liked this it made me laugh very well done top marks for presentation and originality nice to see a six worder that isn't too serious I enjoyed regards Fuller
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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HI Fuller, Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed my writing technique and it gave you a laugh. Sometimes I just like to write with my funny bone....Gosh! Thanks for the inspiration for a new poem. Bless You, Helvi :o)
