The Eminent Eagle
An elegant entry in the A-Z series.89 total reviews
Comment from PoesyPoet
I admire any one who can write an abcderian! They are complicated, but you've pullled it off well. The eagle is such a majestic bird.
Nicely done.
PP
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
I admire any one who can write an abcderian! They are complicated, but you've pullled it off well. The eagle is such a majestic bird.
Nicely done.
PP
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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thanks for your positive comments!
Comment from Scribbelini
And noble it is. This is a great image of an eagle. Great comparison with his Jurassic fore bearers. Beautifully written. Knocked this one out of the park
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
And noble it is. This is a great image of an eagle. Great comparison with his Jurassic fore bearers. Beautifully written. Knocked this one out of the park
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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thanks so much!!
Comment from Curt Mongold
Very nice piece in this series. Although i haven't read the others of which you speak, it nonetheless stands out well on it's own.
An admiral take on this noble avian friend.
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
Very nice piece in this series. Although i haven't read the others of which you speak, it nonetheless stands out well on it's own.
An admiral take on this noble avian friend.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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thank you kindly for your supportive review :-)
Comment from raimie
A lovely tribute to the eagle and it's undeiable beauty and symbol of strength and freedom.
Above belief,
beyond celestial dynasties,
eagles fly.
beautiful. How about I don't say no spag anymore and should there ever become a day ther is. I will then mention it, Lol..
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
A lovely tribute to the eagle and it's undeiable beauty and symbol of strength and freedom.
Above belief,
beyond celestial dynasties,
eagles fly.
beautiful. How about I don't say no spag anymore and should there ever become a day ther is. I will then mention it, Lol..
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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I taught grammar for over two decades, so I die of embarrassment if there is ever any spag - it's quite all right if you stop mentioning it unless I screw up!! :-) thank you :-)
Comment from Stephy Jemmisparks
another vividly typed and stretched imagery you have on poetry canvas.We so often hope to soar like eagles.You have that strength and I am gaining that from all of you guys.I love reading your work.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
another vividly typed and stretched imagery you have on poetry canvas.We so often hope to soar like eagles.You have that strength and I am gaining that from all of you guys.I love reading your work.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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You continue to be one of the kindest reviewers on the site - and the most thoughtful - thank you!!
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo, Adewpearl ....
Thank you for sharing with us, these well-chosen and cleverly arranged words which project a very vivid image
of the majestic Eagle. The picture is beautiful.
There is just one small change to suggest ....
* You have - Gods. Of course, Eagles are not gods but your meaning would be clear if you put - god-like ....
OR .... Graceful and gallant ....
I really enjoyed reading this.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
Hullo, Adewpearl ....
Thank you for sharing with us, these well-chosen and cleverly arranged words which project a very vivid image
of the majestic Eagle. The picture is beautiful.
There is just one small change to suggest ....
* You have - Gods. Of course, Eagles are not gods but your meaning would be clear if you put - god-like ....
OR .... Graceful and gallant ....
I really enjoyed reading this.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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I welcome your suggestions and will think this one over - it was meant to be a metaphor and not one for God but for mythical gods. Hope I did not offend. thank you!
Comment from amyeta
adewperal,
I saw that you wrote this. I admire your poetry so I had to read. This poem is interestng. I did not enjoy it as much as some of the others, however, it shows what a great author you are.
amyeta
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
adewperal,
I saw that you wrote this. I admire your poetry so I had to read. This poem is interestng. I did not enjoy it as much as some of the others, however, it shows what a great author you are.
amyeta
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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It is fascinating to see which are some people's favorites, which not so much - this particular poem resonated a great deal with some, especially those who love eagles, yet others have different ones they like more - I am glad you appreciate them all even if some resonate more with you than others :-) thank you as always!
Comment from Mightierthanthesword
Fantastic. Captures the nobility and beauty of the eagle perfectly.
We were in India last year and I loved watching the eagles fly.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
Fantastic. Captures the nobility and beauty of the eagle perfectly.
We were in India last year and I loved watching the eagles fly.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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India, lucky you! thank you for yet another positive review - hope you like the zebra installment as well!
Comment from goozakkc
Love it! Great imagery and very smooth for this kind of a-z, if I hadnt know what kind of format it was, I wouldnt have noticed! Well I would have noticed, but not becuase it was intrusive to the flow of the poem! Very beautiful.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
Love it! Great imagery and very smooth for this kind of a-z, if I hadnt know what kind of format it was, I wouldnt have noticed! Well I would have noticed, but not becuase it was intrusive to the flow of the poem! Very beautiful.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
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What a lovely compliment -thank you!!
Comment from MissCellanea
I don't know how you do it! A majestic verse for our nation's bird. You've done the eagle justice. Smooth read and quite enjoyable. Perfectly-chosen words describing the eagle's flight. Thanks for sharing. Sue
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
I don't know how you do it! A majestic verse for our nation's bird. You've done the eagle justice. Smooth read and quite enjoyable. Perfectly-chosen words describing the eagle's flight. Thanks for sharing. Sue
Comment Written 14-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
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thanks for your most gracious review :-)