Comment from E. W. Crowe

Excellent

I think I got the story. Here this one way too much as a teacher. I have to ask or it'll drive me made, you did mean God Expelled and not Got Expelled, right?

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

I meant God expelled. Thhanks for the wonderful rating and such great comments. I appreciate you very much.

Comment from lawriemac

Excellent

It's very difficult to work out a six word story, but you have managed to do so to perfection.
The way the mind works these days, it's easier to become pregnant, get expelled and then live off everyone else; sure beats trying to learn and then work for a living.
Best wishes
Lawrie

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Comment from BellasTales

Excellent

hello

Interesting piece. Six word story, not as easy as it sounds. But you did it. Good Work
GL in the contest

Bella

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Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards

Excellent

Skye you don't beat around the bush and for that I respect you. Keep up the truth vs fantasy and keep letting it be known throughout the land as you are doing.

Dave

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Comment from TamaraTel

Excellent

This was a litlle odd for me. I did not quite get it, but I guess that might be the point. It sure is hard to write a story in six words. Good luck in the contest.

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Comment from raimie

Excellent

Very good poem, the photo adds to enhance the point as teenage pregnancy is on the rise. however, a grandchild id a blessed event no matter what the occurence. No spag and thought provoking.

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Comment from Josipher32

Excellent

This was a very interesting piece. At first, I didn't quite get it, so thanks for the explanation in your author's notes.

Great picture choice to accompany the piece.

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Comment from gerry26

Excellent

This is very good, your picture and words say it all. I like the line God expelled. You are very talented. This is very smooth.

gerry

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Comment from Scarlettdreams

Excellent

While I don't agree with the sentiment expressed here, I do think you sure have expressed it well with few words. Well done. Bravo

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Thanks for the wonderful rating and such great comments. I appreciate you very much. That is the beauty of this life... we get to decide for ourselves.

Comment from mushroom

Excellent

i like the way of thinking that went into this, it certainly holds up the truth in what you say very well, and also has quite a topical edge to it for the today aspect

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reply by mushroom on 12-Oct-2008

you're welcome