Comment from phaedra

Excellent

I am enjoying reading the posts in this contest. Must
admit I had a had a question about the God expelled.
Thought you were talking about the way the Creator made
us, labor does expel the child when we give birth.
Your notes gave me a more phisophyical view.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I appreciate you very much. Wow. I never thought of your interpretation, but it also works. Terrific.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Superb art work and words"High school. God expelled. Beautiful grandchild." I would say the baby is all worth the expulsion from school.

Great writing.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I appreciate you very much.

Comment from mmichelle97219

Good

Okay I respect your point of view on this one. I think for me without the explanation at the bottom the God expelled part gets a big huh? From the reader. That is why I gave you a four. With something so short there should be no explanation needed.

Happy Writing.
Michelle

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Read the reviews from the other readers, and you will see why the explanation is necessary. So many did not understand, and appreciated it. I think you are a great poet, who does understand immediately. Thanks.

reply by mmichelle97219 on 11-Oct-2008

I am sorry you took my review so personal. I do not read other reviews before I post mine. I try to give an honest opinion, and really that is all a review is. I mean no ill will. If you would like me to stop reviewing your work let me know. I can be nothing more than honest with my own thoughts and remarks. I did not intend to hurt your feelings or make you defensive.
michelle

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Michelle, I value your opinion, love your reviews. We all get to decide how we feel about the things we read. My short, terse reply was not meant to mean I took it any way except the spirit it was meant. Reading the other reviews would just give you an insight why I wrote the explanation.
Have a great day.

Comment from JeffreyStone

Excellent

The visual and written presentation make a strong comment on the condition of our current society. The impact of such few words is dramatic. Thanks for sharing. JS

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for your kind comments and review. I appreciate this very much.

Comment from Terror2s

Excellent

Good luck with this. Yours is a lot more serious than the one I entered for pregnancy. Good luck. The pic was very nice too. terror

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars. I loved your entry too.

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

Interesting six word poetry contest entry. thought provoking, descriptive language. Used good imagery. Good picture,too. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars.

Comment from Earthwriter

Excellent

very nice dipiction my friend a lot expressed in a very few words and enhanced by the chosen photo excellent post that speaks volumes

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars.

Comment from jmyron

Excellent

This would be a beautiful Senryu. I understand the criteria for the contest, but the last two words would make a fantastic satori.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars. I will consider the next contest... and see what happens. thanks again.

Comment from Sarah_Goldwell

Excellent

excellent piece of work. so clever and so true. I love the artwork you chose, I smiled as read the authors notes not biographical.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars. I am glad you noted -- not biographical.

Comment from Paradox Tremors

Excellent

I couldn't agree with you more about what's happening since they expelled God from the schools--I was lucky, I went to a private school where we said the pledge and the Lord's prayer first thing each morning. Enjoyed the write.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments and shining stars.