Comment from nitad

Excellent

You have managed to create a very, very powerful message in only six little words.
Amazing!
Well done and good luck in the contest. You should do well Take care,
Nita

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from Kaatrina

Excellent

So very good. I love the recognition that when God was taken out of schools, morals ceased to be taught, no home reinforcement of values, in fact, sometimes to the contrary. Such a non judgmental ending. Very nice.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

Thanks for the author's notes. :-) I figured that's what you meant. Excellent six word story here! I wish you every good luck in the contest.
Jan

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from SunlitWhisper

Excellent

Sad but the truth is and always does hurt. Many have taken the Mark (follow Satan) and many more will. God's children are foolish.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from SunlitWhisper

Excellent

Sad but the truth is and always does hurt. Many have taken the Mark (follow Satan) and many more will. God's children are foolish.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from Fish

Excellent

I don't think that I could write anything
in six words that would make that much sense.
Nice pic. Nice work. Yours, Fish

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from jclark

Excellent

Nicely done. Your point was well made and your picture choice completed the story. I really like poems that are thought provoking as this was. Great job!
Judy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from sabby9

Excellent

Hello skye,
A very good presentation.The reflection of the picture attached absolutely perfect with the poem,completely a good combination. Words brilliantly crafted with great imagery. This piece absolutely fascinating. I loved it.Although it's short (six words)but the content filled with deep meaning. Thank you for sharing.Well done.Good luck.
Cheers

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments, and stars. I appreciate it very much.

reply by sabby9 on 11-Oct-2008

dear skye,you are welcome. wish you a great day. still not yet sleep...:)
Good luck.
respectfully
sabby

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

skye,
It's a shame that we can't pray or read the bible in school anymore. I think the bible used to be the textbook
in schools. Moral values have gone down and it is so sad. Good luck on your entry.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments, and stars. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

skye,
easy to read and follow. if you think god isn't in school, you have never been around on test day.
no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work!
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008

Thanks for the great review, comments, and stars. I appreciate it very much. I know, prayers are always a big huge part of any dilemma, stress, or test.

reply by babylonia on 11-Oct-2008

you are very welcome. yes, they are even if they are simply ... please help me not look like a dummy.
love,
barbara