Comment from dressagedeva

Excellent

What a brilliant concept. I am so glad you explained yourself in the author notes, since I was sure that God was a typo and you really meant got.

Fantastic job and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments. I really did mean God....

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

manmade laws are not always on the same path as divine providence but the beliefs that are part of the society we live in are so incredibly varied who is to say what is fair...good read...yours, diana

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from pixiemillie

Excellent

I'm not sure if I get this but my understanding is that since prayer or any allusion to God in schools these days has allowed more of the so-called 'freedom' to do as I wish. The consequences are great as this six-word write states. "Children having children". Who will be responsible.

Thank you for this post. The picture says it all.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from dtimes3

Excellent

How true. The state of affairs in public schools is sad. Good commentary in few words. With only six words I'm sure you had a few left over for another poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments. Just quite a few.... LOL

Comment from The Unlikely author

Excellent

A story told in just a few words is something only a few can do well. You have easily joined the ranks of those people. This is carefully thought out and well done. Good luck in contest

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, how very adorable! "The one who takes my breath away". How very creative, to think of a pregnant woman, carrying the precious cargo which literally does take her breath away. You did this contest an honor by this piece, absolutely wonderful writing. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments. Your words are so very very touching.

Comment from sueseagull

Excellent

This just amazes me that poeple are able to say so much in so few words. The words are perfect and the picture completes the work. The best of luck in the contest. A very enjoyable read.
SUE

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Good morning poet.
I got the message and it was powerful, great, awesome!
I agree with you as well and I wush America would wake up and wise up!
Loyd

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 12-Oct-2008

You are welcome and please visit my work when you can, Loyd

Comment from Badjuju

Excellent

Awesome, truly deserving to be recognized as all time best. I love reading work such as this, when so few words are used but the meaning packs a powerful punch. Great job, Good Luck.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from AbigailDavid

Excellent

Hello, this is cute, and I love the use of the word 'expel', very kewl!! I'm a mother of a small tribe, so i can relate.

Great pic too!

Bye for now and thanks for sharing your writing, abby

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008

Thank you so much for this very supportive and kind review. I appreciate it very much.