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Viewing comments for Chapter 153 "Graduation"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from bluefly
Hi skye,
This is a neat six word that we see too often in the real world. (I wonder, is "God" supposed to be "got"?) I tried to come up with one of these but couldn't get it. It takes a bit of creative talent, which obviously you have.
Scott
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Hi skye,
This is a neat six word that we see too often in the real world. (I wonder, is "God" supposed to be "got"?) I tried to come up with one of these but couldn't get it. It takes a bit of creative talent, which obviously you have.
Scott
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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No, As a nation we expelled God from school when we allowed them to take prayer out of public schools.
This is NOT about me, but a story in 6 words. Thanks, for the thoughts, review, and stopping by.
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Thanks for setting me straight. Now it is even better than I when I first read it. Again, great job!
Comment from earthlybeing
Interesting write. My daughter is due any day and I think she would agree with ....the one who takes my breath away. I guess that can be both the father and the baby. hehe Enjoyed it. Thanks, Jeanette
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Interesting write. My daughter is due any day and I think she would agree with ....the one who takes my breath away. I guess that can be both the father and the baby. hehe Enjoyed it. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Congratulations to you and to your daughter. There is nothing like a baby to make life change dramatically, keep us young, keep us up all night. LOL. Thanks for the terrific review. Yes, they both take your breath away... and leave you with so much love.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Bravo! You certainly know how to say a lot in very few words. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Congratulations. Good luck in the contest. Ray.
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Bravo! You certainly know how to say a lot in very few words. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Congratulations. Good luck in the contest. Ray.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Thanks for the vote of confidence, the terrific review, kind comments. I appreciate you very much.
Comment from kiwi bloke
Hi there SKYE
Well you certainly pulled that off, I was wondering how you were going to do this, and I see the picture speaks volumes,
There is just one thing that I find confusing though.
Why ( god ) expelled ? that dosn't make sense to me
should it be Got expelled
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Hi there SKYE
Well you certainly pulled that off, I was wondering how you were going to do this, and I see the picture speaks volumes,
There is just one thing that I find confusing though.
Why ( god ) expelled ? that dosn't make sense to me
should it be Got expelled
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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We expelled God from school when outlawing prayer in school. We need to change this back. Thanks for the vote of confidence, the terrific review, kind comments. I appreciate you very much.
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Ah Ha I see what you are saying now, Of course I would argue that getting pregnant or not has nothing to do with god, but values and values can be had weather you are religous or not
Comment from whatagrouch
six words - five stars - nearly one star per word. Very well done. Of course, with a picture being worth 1000 words and that great accompanying picture, this should count as 1006 words (my attempt at a joke - and a pretty long winded one at that )
Very nice work
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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six words - five stars - nearly one star per word. Very well done. Of course, with a picture being worth 1000 words and that great accompanying picture, this should count as 1006 words (my attempt at a joke - and a pretty long winded one at that )
Very nice work
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Great review. Great joke... made my day.
I loved the picture... seemed to be perfect for what the story was about. LOL
thanks again.
Comment from J.E. Brown
Isn't it funny how one can say so much with just six lonely words. Here's my attempt "Great poem, yes, this i know".
Poetry isn't my strong point..lol. Good luck and i look forward to more of your work.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Isn't it funny how one can say so much with just six lonely words. Here's my attempt "Great poem, yes, this i know".
Poetry isn't my strong point..lol. Good luck and i look forward to more of your work.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Thanks for the vote of confidence, great review, shining stars. I appreciate your 6 words very much.
Comment from storymama
I was saying to my daughter as I opened this, how on earth can you tell a complete story in six words. Then I read your story and both of us said, Ohhhh, that's how! Very well done. If schools do not think morals are important, this is what happens. God bless you. Laura
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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I was saying to my daughter as I opened this, how on earth can you tell a complete story in six words. Then I read your story and both of us said, Ohhhh, that's how! Very well done. If schools do not think morals are important, this is what happens. God bless you. Laura
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Thanks so much for this wonderful review, and those exceptionally wise comments. This is the problem with our system today... we need to teach morals in school and at home. Thanks very much.
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You are very welcome. The thing is, they have to mesh. If the child is taught morals at home, and the school teaches if it feels good, do it, some kids will listen to their friends until they are older and wiser.
