Vampire Bats
A ghoulish addition to the a to z series.86 total reviews
Comment from BellasTales
Hello
I really liked this piece. very creative and defintely in the spirit of Halloween. Loved your word choice
Nicely done
Bella
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello
I really liked this piece. very creative and defintely in the spirit of Halloween. Loved your word choice
Nicely done
Bella
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thank you - I'm glad you liked the Halloween mood and the word choices :-)
Comment from Paul Greatrix
It is certainly not easy, what you're doing in your poetry, which is what makes it impressive, especially when you get near the tricky realms of U X and Z. I particulary liked Malicious Nightrider. good work.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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It is certainly not easy, what you're doing in your poetry, which is what makes it impressive, especially when you get near the tricky realms of U X and Z. I particulary liked Malicious Nightrider. good work.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thank you - I rather liked malicious nightrider myself LOL
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello adewpearl,
This is another A-Z poem which is not so E-Z as ABC.
This poem reads and flows well and I have no suggestion for improvment.
I liked the following lines as I feel they are the essence of this poem:
Terminator-
ultra vampire wannabe.
Wanton x-tractor
yields zombies.
Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello adewpearl,
This is another A-Z poem which is not so E-Z as ABC.
This poem reads and flows well and I have no suggestion for improvment.
I liked the following lines as I feel they are the essence of this poem:
Terminator-
ultra vampire wannabe.
Wanton x-tractor
yields zombies.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thank you!!!
Comment from rama devi
Another fun one. Loved Kafkaesque. Vampire wannabe made me smile too.
The flow is a bit choppy, but that is suiting the style, so nothing wrong with it.
I find nothing to fix. The x-trick is forgivible....LOL
Warm regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Another fun one. Loved Kafkaesque. Vampire wannabe made me smile too.
The flow is a bit choppy, but that is suiting the style, so nothing wrong with it.
I find nothing to fix. The x-trick is forgivible....LOL
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thank you for the forgiveness and the review LOL :-)
Comment from Celtic~Soul
Interesting ghoulish twist. They are quite the little suckers, aren't they? Ever seen the documentaries where they show the vampire bats licking on wounds on cow necks? Really eeewww, 'cause they film at night with infrared camera...makes their eyes extra creepy (shudder) and their little tongues licking... uck. Must have been a great poem, conjured up all those batty images! Nice Halloween romp. Thanks for the scare!
Dawn
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Interesting ghoulish twist. They are quite the little suckers, aren't they? Ever seen the documentaries where they show the vampire bats licking on wounds on cow necks? Really eeewww, 'cause they film at night with infrared camera...makes their eyes extra creepy (shudder) and their little tongues licking... uck. Must have been a great poem, conjured up all those batty images! Nice Halloween romp. Thanks for the scare!
Dawn
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thank you for your most gorily detailed review!!! :-)
Comment from Sparklecat
This poem was a mouthful! At first, I was getting a picture of a huge deer tick like the ones my dogs used to get. Then I thought, wait a minute. Ticks don't live in caves!
One phrase sounded like it was trying too hard: hemorrhage inducer. I don't know why. It just didn't fit with the others to me.
Wonderful imagery with this one!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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This poem was a mouthful! At first, I was getting a picture of a huge deer tick like the ones my dogs used to get. Then I thought, wait a minute. Ticks don't live in caves!
One phrase sounded like it was trying too hard: hemorrhage inducer. I don't know why. It just didn't fit with the others to me.
Wonderful imagery with this one!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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thanks so much for your comments and review!
Comment from raimie
Pearl that phot is Fantastic and the poem is awesome. Although just the thought of a bat makes my neck itch and my shoulders go up..Lol..
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Pearl that phot is Fantastic and the poem is awesome. Although just the thought of a bat makes my neck itch and my shoulders go up..Lol..
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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hope the neck is feeling better by now! thank you :-)
Comment from J.E. Brown
Great poem... short but to the point lines. Each line tells a message. This poem is a great one that i enjoyed very much. Worthy of the 5 stars.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Great poem... short but to the point lines. Each line tells a message. This poem is a great one that i enjoyed very much. Worthy of the 5 stars.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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you are most kind - thank you!
Comment from unidian
Wanton x-tractor. Love it! See what you mean 'bout the x words :) Is this one in a series of these Brooke? If so, where do I find it? Tom
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Wanton x-tractor. Love it! See what you mean 'bout the x words :) Is this one in a series of these Brooke? If so, where do I find it? Tom
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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I'm posting the poems in the series one by one. Thanks for your support!
Comment from Lynnor
I do love this piece! Very simple and very descriptive of the character and topic. The notations made by the author/poet will help those who are not acquainted with Kafkaesque and some of the other stories and characters. Readers will enjoy this piece and it fits right in with Halloween.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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I do love this piece! Very simple and very descriptive of the character and topic. The notations made by the author/poet will help those who are not acquainted with Kafkaesque and some of the other stories and characters. Readers will enjoy this piece and it fits right in with Halloween.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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thanks so very much for your thoughtful commentary :-)
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You are welcome. Last night, I watched on the T.V. 'Vampire 2000' it was really very good and such a twist to the end- if I can find the book I'm going to add it to my collection. Your poem though , I thought was excellent.
