Comment from Mountainstar2

Excellent

Good luck on the contest entry!

This is a very good one for the entry. It says it all in just the six words given...

Which goes well with the drawing of the picture given here.

Thanks for sharing this one today...MOuntainstar2...

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Hello Mountainstar2, Thank you for your great review.
Regards, LateBloomer

Comment from raimie

Excellent

Beautiful, i also used this phot as well as another writer unidian. We all gave such different perspetives ,but we all captured the angst. Great job.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Hello raimie, That's the beauty of art and poetry ... all the different interpretations. I guess a picture really is worth a million words. Regards, LateBloomer

Comment from J.E. Brown

Excellent

I think you captured the essence of the photo to a tee. You've said a lot in those 6 words. Great job and good luck in the contest. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thank you, J.E. Brown. I appreciate your great review and insight. Regards, LateBloomer

Comment from Shari_K

Excellent

This did tell a sad, heart-felt story. To the point and I can relate, something like this is what I used to be like. Good luck in the contest with this!

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Hello Shari_K, Thank you for your insightful review. I do appreciate your candid reply. What can I say ... other than ... parents ... love your children. Regards, LateBloomer

Comment from fayesh

Good

This was an interesting choice of words. I would reconsider the word "Always" which is too final. Choices are "Somewhat" "Something" (would show a missing element to cause the first line).

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008

Thank you, fayesh, for your review and suggestion. However, I shall leave it where it is because in my humble opinion, if you have not felt loved as a child, you never completely feel loved and are always in search of it ... even when you have found it. That insecurity is always there. I think this is a matter of opinion. Thanks for the great review. Regards, LateBloomer