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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Donovan
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search, read, comment, rate, thank, reply.....I think you are right, this would be a much better way to live life than whatever else we are choosing.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Great job with these six words, Teri. To me, love and laughter are the two things we need to live every day. Best of luck in the contest.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you Karyn. I am really down about contests right now. I am not doing very well at all. Thanks for making me smile. Love, Teri
reply by IndianaIrish on 07-Oct-2008
    Just don't let contest results stop you from joining them and keep you from writing, Teri. You just never know about these contests and how the voting will go. Keep on trying!
    Indy :>)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you Karyn. It was heartbreaking to get a 1 on one of my reviews. It was not that bad at all. It was my Nanny 911 entry
reply by IndianaIrish on 07-Oct-2008
    Yes, I know exactly how you feel, Teri. I got a "one" not too long ago for one of my poems. You just have to read what they say, and if they offer nothing constructive in their review, just try to forget their comments and don't get down on yourself...keep believing!
Comment from nora arjuna
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Teri, I can't read your six words on my screen. They are hidden behind your profile.

Suggest to insert some blank lines before your six words. They will fall below the picture.

So there's another six-word contest! Good luck anyway. :)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Can you look at it and see if you can see it now? Thanks my friend. Hugs, Teri
reply by nora arjuna on 07-Oct-2008
    OK, I can read them now. You've included the main ingredients in life. Well done.
Comment from earthlybeing
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Well thought out and written. So true that if we could all live this way it would be a much happier world. Enjoyed. Hope you are well. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Love, Teri
Comment from rayrobertj
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What you said is true these are the morals that my wife and I live by, one God first,two LOVE ,three faith.four trust five
understanding six respect you must have all of these morals
or you have nothing at all

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. I totally believe in what you said. Hugs, Teri
Comment from dreaming
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What a wonderful picture and the words are great, matching perfectly, like a perfect match. I am sure we all have these perfect moments, although they are mostly fleeting. That's all we can ask down here. That is the picture of heaven we have to keep. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs,Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Yes Teri this is a perfect six word story of a happy couple who know how to -
Live, Laugh and Love
this way they will St together forever
I wish you the best in the contest.
Gert

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Gert thank you very much. I just dont seem to have much luck in contests anymore. Hugs, Teri
reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Oct-2008
    Hi Teri,

    Don't feel bad either do I.
    I'm taking a long break from the prompt contest.
    I may enter one of Fanstory's contest. who knows
    Love
    Gert
Comment from Terror2s
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Your story is very positive. What a great picture to accompany it too. Good luck in the contest. This probably isn't going to be enough to write. terror

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you for the review. The contest calls for a six word story. This is all we can use for this. Hugs, Teri