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Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Life Can be a Dream"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from Jonesy
If you already posted a six-worder in a different book, you might already know I think these should be in the poem section. The reason is there is no story-reviewing criteria I can apply when reviewing them.
There just aren't.
That being said, it would be unfair of me to grade these lower because I'd do so out of personal perference, and I think we get too much of that on F.S. as it is. But the other side is there is nothing I can offer as far as a critque either.
Hope you understand.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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If you already posted a six-worder in a different book, you might already know I think these should be in the poem section. The reason is there is no story-reviewing criteria I can apply when reviewing them.
There just aren't.
That being said, it would be unfair of me to grade these lower because I'd do so out of personal perference, and I think we get too much of that on F.S. as it is. But the other side is there is nothing I can offer as far as a critque either.
Hope you understand.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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I totally understand. I just like to do them. Hugs, Teri
Comment from ledford
So true:-) What a wonderful world it would be!
Good luck in the contest! Wow! I just realized this is the 10th one of these. It's a hit!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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So true:-) What a wonderful world it would be!
Good luck in the contest! Wow! I just realized this is the 10th one of these. It's a hit!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from wazzo
If only each and every couple could take this as a hope a goal in their lives it seems to be live love and break up at the first hiccup. Glad you thought it and then penned it Bless you Albert.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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If only each and every couple could take this as a hope a goal in their lives it seems to be live love and break up at the first hiccup. Glad you thought it and then penned it Bless you Albert.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you Albert. "Hugs, Teri
Comment from RapturedHeart
Great entry Teri - and great advice for us all:). Though I've seen the picture often, it goes well with it, too. All the best in the contest. Heather
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Great entry Teri - and great advice for us all:). Though I've seen the picture often, it goes well with it, too. All the best in the contest. Heather
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you Heather. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I like this there is so much truth and meaning in these words to create a good strong work with these limitations you have done well good luck regards Fuller
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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I like this there is so much truth and meaning in these words to create a good strong work with these limitations you have done well good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri,
Those are good thoughts. Isn't it great laughing together
with family, friends, and all those that we love. Best wishes for the 6 word story contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Teri,
Those are good thoughts. Isn't it great laughing together
with family, friends, and all those that we love. Best wishes for the 6 word story contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Twomoon
Teri, this was a lovely entry. I enjoy your beautiful self giving us a loving verse to enjoy and make our day! Good entry and good luck in the contest, dear one, much love twomoon
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Teri, this was a lovely entry. I enjoy your beautiful self giving us a loving verse to enjoy and make our day! Good entry and good luck in the contest, dear one, much love twomoon
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. Love, Teri
Comment from babylonia
teri,
i see another contest is on the horizon. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. LOL i guess we can never run out of these things. good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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teri,
i see another contest is on the horizon. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. LOL i guess we can never run out of these things. good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you dear friend. Love, Teri
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teri,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written six word poem. If we turn our problems into solutions and learn to see the humor of the situation, we will have a happier life. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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A very well written six word poem. If we turn our problems into solutions and learn to see the humor of the situation, we will have a happier life. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you Charlie. Hugs, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. L&H Charlie
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You're welcome, Teri. H&L Charlie
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You're welcome, Teri. L&H Charlie
Comment from Kym Jade
Well, for a six word story it certainly says all the things we should live by. It is wonderful advice and we hope the opportunity to do so comes everybody's way.
Love and huge hugs
Hope you win
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Well, for a six word story it certainly says all the things we should live by. It is wonderful advice and we hope the opportunity to do so comes everybody's way.
Love and huge hugs
Hope you win
Comment Written 07-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friends. It would be great to finally win again. Love you both, Teri
