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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from EllieKaye
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Hi Teri,
This is a sweet six=worder. I wish you many readers and votes in the contest. I like your author note as well- so true.

eLLIE

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
    Thank you Ellie. Love, Teri
Comment from Dru Koyote
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Teri7,
I agree with your message....it would be difficult not to. I have no suggestions for revisions.
Did you select to photo - or was the photo part of the contest?
Dru Koyote

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
    Thank you. I picked out the photo. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Nightwind1
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Live, Laugh, Love..........those are three words that tell a complete story in themselves. This is a good contest entry. Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Stephy Jemmisparks
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full of fun and gay humour, happiness and passion, stirred with grace and love, the statement inn just six words, well condensed and summarised, fully contained and amplified, a real delight to read.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from fayesh
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A very idealistic state of existence in those chosen six words. If only it were true, and life was as simple as your six words.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you. Teri
Comment from wierdgrace
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wow, what structure, what excellent words, I loved it so much. You are a wonderful writer, and the picture was perfect. I can not tell you how much I enjoyed this. thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for making me smile. Love, Teri
Comment from chaswriter
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Teri - What a great sentiment and a great way to live your life. And you are right that the world would be a better place with this philosophy. Charlie.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you Charlie. Hugs, Teri
Comment from adewpearl
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The alliteration is lovely - and certainly the sentiment is an ideal everyone would like to have be true of their lives.
I wish this had proved to be the story of my marriage~

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from racingponies
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How sweet! That would be wonderful if we just all lived that every day. Such happiness everywhere would be fun to be around. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you. Teri
Comment from FrankieT
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Excellent advice, Terry. It is hard to say much about a six word story so I have to fill this up so you can get my rating.
Well done! :o)

FrankieT

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2008
    Thank you Frankie. Hugs, Teri